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Reviews for Witching Hours

By : Gunwild
  • From Shaellin on June 06, 2011
    I'm loving this series! This is my second time reading Chapter 6. The Hay Lin/Orube dynamic works surprisingly well. Also, definitely looking forward to seeing how things go when Hay Lin has that talk with her parents.

    BTW, there's a typo in paragraph 4 still: "They had appeared in public, in as Guardians," The "in" needs to go.

    One thing I think this story needs is more explanation of how Cornelia and Taranee got together. We've gotten to see how everyone else hooked up but those two were first shown already together. I'm guessing that must be a rather interesting story. Maybe they could tell it to their friends once everybody's secrets start coming out within the group.
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  • From ThePastmaster on April 26, 2011
    Wonderful as always. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Heart of the cards on April 21, 2011
    This is my first time I have reading this story, but from what I have hear that it is very popular and people have been waiting for updates, so good for you for giving them one! I really like the style of your writing style, you really know how to get a reader into the story and the characters heads. You make very interesting and different relationship ideas! Also this story is super sexy, I have rarely almost never read such a hot story. I hate to jump on a bandwagon but I agree with almost everyone else, Will and Susan are the best relationship here, but that doesn't meant the others aren't also very good, I like Orube and Haylin especial now with the latest chapter. Now that I have read this story I love it and I will check it every week for a new chapter!
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 19, 2011
    HOLY FUCKING SHIT. JUst when I had given up on this story ever being contineud, you ride in and save the day with a new chapter. And this chapter was great! Before this chapter, I thought the Hay Lin and Orube thing wasn't all that interesting compared to the others, but you just made them second to Will and Susan! The characterization is wonderful, you've mande me love this couple, and I don't know why you're not satisfied with the sex scene because it's all the better for being short and sweet. GREAT JOB!!!

    If I had to pick one thing I didn't like about this chapter, the only thing I could say was that Orube identified Will and Irma as a couple. I thought Will and Irma's chapter was nice and gave Irma some good confidence and all, but it didn't seem to be anything for them to get together for (especially not when you'd did such a great chapter of Will and Susan hooking up), and I really want Will to be emotionally exclusive with Susan, for them to be real, complete lovers.

    But other than that tiny nitpick, this chapter was probably the best non-Susan chapter so far, and I loved it. Please, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE continue! And I don't want to rush genius, but waiting for these is AGONIZING!
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 19, 2011
    Yahoooy! Finally a sixth chapter of one of my fave fice. Well done, very well done.
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  • From Yumberduddle on September 22, 2010
    wow, i totally LOVE this story! plz tell me ur gonna keep it going!
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  • From ANON - bob on July 09, 2010
    this is a great story, will you make more?
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  • From ANON - Sheth on April 07, 2010
    the one thing I'm not seeing in WITCH H-fic, IrMartin; how 'bout it.
    And please don't tell me you don't support crush-indulgence, I've read Stranded

    "You must be the change you wish to see in the world"
    ... Mohandas K Gandhi.

    "Why is it the boy you like never likes you?"
    ... Teen girl cliche.
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  • From ANON - NiniPrime on March 22, 2010
    To be quiet honest, I actually got to reading this due to thwe pictures I saw on various forums. I decided to check out the story and was plesently surprised. Not knowing the characters tha well alomst made it hard to get the characters, but not to read. So I literally read 1/3rd of the w.i.t.c.h. comic to get the full experience. From that; all the chapters are great, and I am looking forward to reading more. Your new fan, NiniPrime.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 02, 2010
    I've reviewed this to say I love it before, but you should check out this: http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pic-65796.html More fanart of your story! Please keep writing it!
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 21, 2009
    I was just checking to see if you'd added a chapter, when I noticed that I've never actually reviewed this story. I swear I thought I had, but apparently not. Let me just say that I absolutely love this fic, and the ways you find to drive the relationships are excellent. Is there ever going to be the situation where everyone finds out about everyone else?
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  • From CrazyKinks on September 23, 2009
    Hot, hot, hot!
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  • From ANON - This is Cool on September 14, 2009
    But I was wondering about something, you've written two chapters about Will and Susan so far and they're totally bitching, all of your chapters are. But so far with them the chapter is almost all from Will's perspective. That makes sense and all and it's really awesome and done good, but it would be cool to get a chapter about them where it's Susan being spotlighted. She must have some issues of her own to work through about having a romantic relationship with her daughter, at the very least she's made a few comments about her age which I'm sure you could get milage out of. Anyway this is greta can't wait for the next chapter!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 12, 2009
    dude i remember reading this like a year ago, u write 2 slow, but damn is it awesome when u do update, every chapter is so hot and u really make it seem real 2
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  • From Shaellin on September 11, 2009
    Oh yeah. Definitely needed to reread those first two chapters. It had been so long I completely forgot that Will told her mom about the Guardians between chapters 1 and 2.

    Great stuff here. All of it! Keep up the awesome work! I am so looking forward to the next astounding chapter in this great work! =)
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