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Reviews for Quite, During Sex

By : NickCallahan
  • From SunTsuToriden on June 05, 2008
    What the hell did Katara do to Mai?
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  • From SunTsuToriden on June 05, 2008
    Well I only have three queries about the fantastic first chapter.

    1) Was Mai facing Ty Lee's front or Back?
    2) What was Katara's Tentacle made from?
    3) What the hell did Combustion Man say?

    Apart from that, first chapter was fantastic!
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  • From ANON - hugetits92007 on February 24, 2008
    awesome story! hope u keep going! great job!
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  • From ANON - garsdal on February 02, 2008
    i love the story, katara a little ouc with the bloodbending, though that only makes it sweeter, cant really point my finger on ANYTHING to criticice at all. please keep up the good works cuz i for 1 will be looking forwerd for more:) and i still wonder wtf combustion man is up to.

    (if my spelling is bad, it is because of the little green irish people.)
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  • From mrse7en00 on January 21, 2008
    im confused about the sex scene

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  • From ANON - HANDS OFF! on January 12, 2008
    I can understand 2,3 or even 4 hits to an excellent story but seven in a row...COME ON! This story is not worth that and you will seldom find a story that is! This story is maybe average at best. Shame on you!!!!!
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  • From Mackrel on January 05, 2008
    Your title is bugging the crap out of me. Please check your spelling.
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  • From Bishonen on December 31, 2007
    That was great the only tip i have is to write more soon.

    With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
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  • From ANON - Spleefmistress on December 31, 2007
    I'm not signed in right now, but I just wanted to let you know that I appreciate this story. It's well-written, with fun twists. I hope that Katara does it with/or has fun with Combustion Man, he needs some love too. As for Toph, i am a bit confused... she has a dick, yes, but does she still have her pussy?
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  • From GhostwriterMO on December 31, 2007
    Oh boy! Katara is really pd-off now! More of that waterhealing warm-up bending and what will Zuko do to Mai? Great Aang is an avatar sized pin-cushin only Azula or Zhao would be that stupid! I can't wait to see Sokka tame Azula, and I know when Aang gets back on his feet that Azula will be in BIG trouble! Please keep up the great work and if anyone deserves a royal rearend whooping (and kicking) it's Azula! So please let Azula be next! Four and 1/2 stars so far. (I wonder how Sokka and Toph play now?)
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  • From ANON - Dark Sage on December 31, 2007
    Moar!!! Nice story, nice descriptions, nice everything! Get the next chapter out as quick as you can!
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  • From GhostwriterMO on December 28, 2007
    I have to know what Zuko and Toph did to azula! (about time someone brought her to her knees!) I want to know what Aang and Sokka do (or who) in the next chapter. And I love Katara's revenge! So please update soon and with more!
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  • From TimKai on December 21, 2007
    Oh Christ, as soon as the last three lines hit, I absolutely lost it. ouch, I bit my lip!

    Grim, very grim for a time. How can you turn such a story around and make is so completely hilarious in three . . . freaking . . . sentences?

    So cool. This isn't really a proper review, I know, but I just HAD to give voice to this.
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  • From Bishonen on December 19, 2007
    This was fucking great i'd been thinking about doing something kinda like this but you did a way better job than i could have hope for the next chapter soon and one thing you should remove this from the anime section because your not supposed to have multiple copies of the same story.

    With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
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