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By : Leftshoe
  • From lycan on February 05, 2013
    A suggestion since you already wrote the next part. you should write an alternate version of this story where she waits to tell them instead and go from there.
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  • From lycan on October 08, 2012
    I highly doubt anyone would let there 14 year old daughter's 13 year old boyfrind move in with them let alone share a room.
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  • From ANON - John M. Daulton II on August 24, 2012
    Sequel anyone? All in all, one of the hottest stories i have ever read ad now oone of my favorites, why's Mille break up with Hirokie, and i think you should this story from, their point of view too.
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  • From ANON - John M. Daulton on August 24, 2012
    Okaaaaaay, Aelita has gone from annyanomus prostitue, to nymphomainiac, and now to full blown whore. My kind of story.
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  • From ANON - John M. Daulton II on August 23, 2012
    If Yumi STAYS with Willam, i'm gonna have to kill something (It's obivous she dosen't like him).
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  • From TalynDarkwulf on April 03, 2009
    The story was amazing. I loved it - the orgy party was insane. I really do hope there is more to this story, definitely one of my top 10.
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  • From cloudslayer69 on November 10, 2008
    keep it comin i LOVE your story ^^ hope theres more and more ^^
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  • From ShadowSlayer on November 03, 2008
    well, I read the first chapter but it might take me a while to read the rest. So far it's pretty good. You've got good writing skills. =^-^=
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  • From Shinzochi on November 03, 2008
    THAT FIC IS HOTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It's the hotttest one i've ever read, and i think you should continue with it cause i would love to read MORE, and i think the other readers would like to read more too.
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  • From lb54 on August 31, 2008
    I agree wholheartedly with your higher quality=less reviews theory >>;;

    it is a good story! I give you a good review XD

    but yeah,sadly if its not yaoi or something no ones gonna review....gits
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  • From cloudslayer69 on May 19, 2008
    hey great story I LOVE IT!!! kept me on the edge of my seat ^^ and its great..but i had a thought...millie and olrich and hiroki and yumi sex :P BTW....im writing my own story..hope to have it put up soon ^^ well hope to read more form ya ^^ your very good ^^

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  • From Ari22682 on March 20, 2008
    I like what you've done with this story thus far.

    You should go towards a big group sex outing (though I doubt Hiroki/Yumi will be that well received). I imagine Aelita getting roughly taken by any three of the boys at once would be right up her alley, and I'm sure the guys would like to see the girls go at it with one another...preferably with someone (say, Yumi) sports a strap-on just for the occasion.

    Regardless, I'm looking forward to your next chapter.
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  • From on March 18, 2008
    The orgy..... definitely go with the orgy idea! I'd love to see a Millie and Ulrich pairing, even if it's just for a chapter, and Hiroki and Yumi is also something that I have thought about!
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  • From on March 17, 2008
    Loving this story, but I'm REALLY disappointed that Aelita cannot get pregnant...... hoping that will change in one of the future chapters...... maybe as a 'SURPRISE!' from Xana.
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  • From EmperoroftheNetherlandsII on March 13, 2008
    Uitstekend! (Excellent)

    A wonderful piece, I do look forward to the next chapter. I implore you to continue.

    From,
    His Imperial Majesty, Byron, Second Emperor of the Netherlands
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