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Reviews for Azula's Lost Chapters OR Azula's New Cook

By : DecieverGod
  • From jaxlax21 on May 04, 2008
    Nice chapter, its finally going somewhere. But I was expecting some fingering in the bath by Azula, it would have made things much hotter.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 01, 2008
    SWEET JESUS IN HEAVEN, WHERE IS THE NEW CHAPTER??? I CAN'T WAIT ANY MORE!!!

    And by that I mean I love this Fanfiction... Please Update soon...
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  • From ANON - DRACUS on April 24, 2008
    This is starting to get very interesting, continue with it please I would like to see if Azula has a very erotic dream about her and Tatsu.
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  • From Herhand01 on April 22, 2008
    Oh sweet! Been looking forward to lemons ever since I started reading this fic. Go ahead and take your time then! (not too much time; it's too addicting to wait several months for a new chapter)
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  • From WildWestSamurai on April 22, 2008
    Well, glad to see you gave a reason for why this story is on AFF.net, but I like how you're taking things slowly. Tension and build-up just make sex scenes better to me. Keep up the excellent characterizations and update soon. ^^
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  • From ANON - kubot on April 22, 2008
    I really love this story... you do such a good job of keeping Azula in character, and your OC is really well defined and constructed. Keep it up! I look forward to the next chapter!
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  • From WildWestSamurai on April 10, 2008
    Alright. I had reservations about this story at first, but it got better & better. Very well done. Perfect characterizations & writing talent. Can't wait for an update. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 07, 2008
    Got to love the way you're building tension, even if it is something more subtitle right now, and Azula is starting to feel (and already feeling) something for him. (Which, make sense if any thing is going to really happened, it will come from her).
    The Fact that you gave them both something in common (mother issues and people don’t like them) even if it is for different reasons.

    Great Fic, keep going…
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  • From Granite on March 28, 2008
    I hate Azula but I find this story very interesting and will be looking for your next update.~Stone2fire
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  • From ANON - jozepy on March 15, 2008
    This is really good, hope to see more very soon. I think you pin point Azula very well, as well as Mai and Tai Lee.
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  • From ANON - kube on February 02, 2008
    I like this story... nice job on Azula, she is very in character! I like your OC, Tatsuya, what a well-defined character you have created. Nice story.
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  • From Herhand01 on January 30, 2008
    I'm really enjoying the plot of this fanfic! I'm especially glad that your original character seems to be a little more complex than most; it's even better that he doesn't possess a backround story that can be explain in a paragraph. I've found that I'm focused on the Captain as well as enjoying Azula's reactions to him. Please, continue your efforts!

    P.S. Was the bit about the halberd in Ch.5 supposed to be some sort of innuendo? Cause it seemed like it to me. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 03, 2008
    OMG, FLIRTING!!!! O.O

    I Like this fic, I can't judge in a grammatical way, English is not my first language (take the fact that I’m not having problems to read it as a complement, if you will ^-^ ), but I can say the history is very cool. I Like Azula Fictions were she Isn't having affairs whit people from her family or friends and I like the way this particular fiction is developing.

    The only thing that bugs me about this fic is Ty Lee’s name; it is Ty, not Tai… Not a big deal actually since her a Mai are very IC, especially with Ty trying to get all the attention to herself, that really go with the “Six sisters that look-a-like thing” of “The Beach”

    And Azula is very IC too, that’s Rare, she is a difficult character to write about and Tasuya… I think he is sexy! OoO

    So, More Please??? *Puppy Eyes*

    (You Know, you could put this on FF.net, You would get more people reviewing it, since every body there will not be just expecting a Sex scene =^.^=)

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  • From ANON - ... on November 26, 2007
    UHU, I've been waiting SO LONG for a Fic “Azula/RandomSoldier”, AND it's Better than That, It's Azula/CaptainRandom.

    I Like your OC btw, I would like to see things a bit on HIS POV.

    I'm looking forward for the sex... (THERE! I SAID IT!!!!)
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  • From ANON - R.U.P. on November 05, 2007
    This is very good, but I think I need more chapters to give a better review...

    Plz?
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