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Reviews for Azula's Lost Chapters OR Azula's New Cook

By : DecieverGod
  • From ANON - Anon on July 12, 2008
    I have to say this is one of the best stories I've ever read. The way you tell it is just so... vivid. Hope to see more of it in the future.
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  • From ANON - Warlock5184 on July 08, 2008
    Very inertesting story dont see many Azula ones. The Characters are nicly made following the show. The way Azula juggling the Captain, feelings for said Captain and her duty was done very well staying in tune with the character for the most part. Only a few spelling mistake nothing to really big to point out. Also notice the last two chapters (18, 19) were a little shorter then the rest but was alright, you may want to just combine them later.
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  • From WildWestSamurai on July 04, 2008
    Hmmm... These aftermath chapters are interesting. I find it intriguing how Azula seems to be juggling this changed relationship with Tatsu. On the one hand, she seems to be reprimanding herself for doting on him and "falling" for him; on the other hand, she seems to enjoy it, in a sense. All in all, a very realistic portrayal that's easily believable. And, despite Tatsu not having said much since the whole affair with the princess, he's still as badass as before. I could picture that War Minister both annoyed and quaking in his boots at once. ^^ Update soon.
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  • From ANON - Juls on June 26, 2008
    Wow...great story...I was reading it over my phone (believe it or not), and just had to keep clicking to the next chapter. I like getting Azula's POV...you've kept her true to her character while allowing readers to imagine that the cruel, evil b**** of the TV series might have a bit of a heart. I can't wait to see how the rest of this unfolds. Thanks for writing! :-)
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 21, 2008
    Oh, please tell me you will not stop just because You Made (Perfectly Made, btw, probaly the best one I have ever seen) the sex sceene... I Want more of this fic, I want to know what will hapend with Azula and Tatsu (I Love him, he is great, he can be a really nice guy or a vicious murder, I love it about him, he is the kind of guy I would fell for... As weird as it seems.. (I am a girl btw XD)).

    Please don't stop.

    Can't wait to see more!!!

    Update soon...
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  • From NeeNvirgo on May 12, 2008
    GENIUS!!! lol, amazingg!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From Herhand01 on May 12, 2008
    Very well done. I'm thoroughly impressed with the amount of thought and effort shown in chapter 15.
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  • From WildWestSamurai on May 11, 2008
    Sssssssssssss!! Now, that was hot. I had figured Azula would be kind of awkward throughout this, but you had her pull it off quite cleanly and well within the boundaries of realism. I liked how the seeming foreplay was Tatsu's rantings about his past and the finale, his bloodthirsty brutality. I could picture Azula's trademark smirk quite clearly at that moment. One happy psychotic couple. ^_^

    Lack of dialogue during the act aside from names helped it delve further into the spectre of realism. How Azula broke her "maidenhead" sounded plausible enough. I liked how Azula was on top and in control and yet did let herself go at some moments while Tatsu was under her control, physically and emotionally, and yet still brought some contributions to the sex. All in all, trenched in realism and very hot. Nice addition with all the biting and scratching. Rarrr.... *makes sure I still have "psychopathic woman" on my list of sexual fantasies*

    Update soon. This story just gets better and better and your writing style never wavers. ^^
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  • From ANON - tetrambs on May 10, 2008
    Just read your story, very entertaining. I would recommend a spell check program. Perhaps openoffice.org can supply one. You have a good writing style so far, but those small mistakes are like bumps in the road. Ruining a perfectly good drive. And also, *ahem* add the smut. The limey scenes you've provided so far prove that you do have some good potential there. Keep up the good work.
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  • From WildWestSamurai on May 08, 2008
    Woot! One rotisserie-style roasted Earthbender, served up hot! ^^ Absolutely excellent detail in the fight sequences. It was heart-poundingly awesome and kept my interest with the display in range of tactics. Put simply, Tatsu was on fire (forgive the pun. lol)!

    Update soon!!
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  • From ANON - kubot on May 08, 2008
    WOW! That chapter was so good... I could practically see the Agni Kai playing out, your descriptions were great. Also, I looove Azula's reaction to the Agni Kai, I can just imagine her sadistic smirking! ^^ I agree, looking forward to the smut!
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  • From jaxlax21 on May 06, 2008
    I'm definently likeing where Azula's request to see him in her room after the fight is hinting at! Now hurry up with the next chapter! I want to get to the hot smex!!
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  • From WildWestSamurai on May 05, 2008
    Ooooh, an Agni Kai. ^^ Earth against fire! Woot! I'm uncertain how to divide my gambling money. Ummmmmm... I'll put $20 on Tatsu over the Earthbender by a hair of a decision. lol Update soon. ^_^
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  • From ANON - DRACUS on May 05, 2008
    INTERSTING, VERY INTERESTING KEEP GOING, I WOULD LIKE TO SEE WHAT AZULA WOULD DO AFTER THE FIGHT WITH THE EARTHBENDER IS OVER WITH, DO A ANOTHER STORY ASAP.
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  • From WildWestSamurai on May 04, 2008
    I actually like how slowly & carefully you're treating this piece. It makes it seem all the more realistic the longer it takes to get to the sex. Absolutely brilliant job and the characterizations are as spot-on as ever, particularly the long teasing scene with Azula (thanks for making her little tease show realistic to her personality and sizzlingly erotic at once) and Tastuya where he desires to look but isn't sure if she'll fry his ass. xD Poor guy. Can't wait for more.
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