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Reviews for Tempestuous

By : YoukaiFate
  • From ANON - Novicegirl on December 17, 2007
    I am REAlly enjoying this. Please continue. Please continue I will be looking for more!
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  • From ANON - Kay on December 16, 2007
    Great story! Update really soon!
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  • From AnonymousHexAngel on December 16, 2007
    hey there! love your story so far.
    if you're still waiting to see episode 12 of season three of avatar.

    go to veoh.com and type in avatar episode 12!

    it's cool!
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  • From ANON - rychelle on December 15, 2007
    You can't just leave it here!!!! plz this is really good plz finish it
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  • From ANON - Symetrical break on November 25, 2007
    Good story, I really like it so far. I will be checking for updates of this.
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  • From smeghead on November 19, 2007
    This is very enjoyable, I'm looking forward to when they actually meet.
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  • From ANON - INC on November 18, 2007
    I am really looking forward to reading more of this story. Please update soon I will eb watching for it.
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  • From Allure on November 04, 2007
    Well done, I look forward to the next chapter.
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  • From wickedwiccanofthemiddwest on November 01, 2007
    very good.
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  • From luna26 on October 31, 2007
    And the word of the day is 'succulent'...that was way too funny. Read all three chapters in one go today and I'm already anxious for the next update. Great job!
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  • From Lunar84 on October 29, 2007
    Amazing!!!! Absolutely incredible start. You have wonderful talent! I was immediately sucked into this story from the first few lines. This story flows beautifully. There are no grammer or punctuation mistakes that I noticed. Though you have only written three chapters I can already tell this will be one of my favorite fics. It's going on the favorites list right now. If you have a mailing list in which you inform your readers of new updates I would love to be apart of that if at all possible. I really hope you continue to update this wonderful story. I know sometimes it's difficult to update when you have real life issues going on. I look forward to your next chapter!
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  • From GhostStories on October 29, 2007
    I'm not usually a big reader of Avatar fanfiction but I gotta say, I'm loving the hell outta this story. Its a little sad that Aang has matured so much and lost so much of his playful spirit, but thats the only path I can imagine for someone with a destiny like his. I see this plot device around a lot- Katara marries Zuko politically- But I like how you're going about it. Keep it up, I look forward to reading the rest.
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  • From AprilEmprich on October 28, 2007
    I'm really enjoying this story so far. I think you're doing a wonderful job with it! I hope that you're able to update soon! Keep up the good work!
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  • From Granite on October 27, 2007
    Impressive... already one of my favorite stories and it only has three chapters. Impressive
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  • From poornmiserable on October 27, 2007
    wow this is really a good story..you have tremendous talent..its written beautifully i really do hope you update soon....i would like to know if you will incorporate how well katara waterbends in this story, cause she is a kickass bender in season 3 especially the episode 'painted lady' and also i hope you don't write off her 'inner fire' cause a lot of authors with this similar plot make katara weak and domestic well keep up the good work and update soon
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