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Reviews for Tempestuous

By : YoukaiFate
  • From ANON - Kasson G on January 03, 2008
    This is now on my list as a story to look out for. Great job!
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  • From ANON - Sable 24 on January 02, 2008
    This story is awesome. I loved this chapter written lemon or not. Zuko's thought were good enough for me. Great job keep going I will wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Novicegirl on January 02, 2008
    I thought the lime was perfect for this story. It fit. Sometimes a lemon can be overly done and ruin the story for me anyway. I say you did a perfect job and if you want to rewrite it that would be fine because I know it would "fit" into your story.
    Novicegirl
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  • From LadyKadeana on January 01, 2008
    Omg, this story is amazing. It was a great New Years gift to have a new chapter.
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  • From ANON - Alauralen on January 01, 2008
    Yay! I've been waiting for this ever since I read the last chapter. I would have liked lemons, but I understand that it is not always easy to get them out. Even without them, the chapter was wonderful! I think you did an awesome job! I know that you just updated, but I'm going to be impatient and beg that you get the next chapter up as soon as possible, LOL. Keep up the great work!
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  • From Allure on January 01, 2008
    Get on with it! Great chapter
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 31, 2007
    All I can say is MORE. Nice job
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  • From ANON - Jesse on December 30, 2007
    Oh Please update soon!! Great story, you have me hooked. Can't wait!
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  • From ANON - Bee on December 30, 2007
    UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE! lol. What's his first words to her going to be? Will Katara actually let him sleep with her their first night? I love this story!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 29, 2007
    nice story
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  • From Nuk on December 27, 2007
    What an INCREDABLE story! I am simply amazed! Totally enthralled! I hope you are still writing this series! I would really like to find out what you have planned! your grammer is simply stunning! Very lovely!
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  • From luna26 on December 19, 2007
    Naughty! How can you leave us poor readers hanging from a cliffy like that. Granted it bring us back for more but still. I think this is a wonderful AU story. I wouldn’t let yourself get bogged down in trying to keep everything inline with the TV series. The characters have all matured and you can make allowances. I think Iroh is a pip. Please don’t keep us hanging for long…maybe an update for x-mas! It would make a very nice present 
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  • From ANON - ldydarkstr on December 19, 2007
    You can't leave it there! *howls* YOU CAN'T! GOSH DARNIT! I love this fic, it is wonderfully written. You have a firm grasp on politics and I loved how you have developed Aang's adult character and responsibilities. Yet, I say again, YOU CAN'T LEAVE IT THERE!

    *taps foot* more. Now.

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  • From Ardeo on December 17, 2007
    Wow, excellent! I somehow missed this fic and I'm actually sort of glad because it meant that I got to read four chapters all at once...of course, I did get left hanging on a real doozy of a cliffhanger, lol. I loved your depiction of the ceremony and the aftermath, and really, all that preceded it, as well. You really have done a great job of zeroing in on what it must have been like (to some extent, at least) for a girl to have to sacrifice herself for a political alliance. I think that this is far more light-hearted than what occurred historically, but it makes total sense given Katara's background and the Avatar universe itself. All of the ceremony and fussing and tradition is great for the outside world setting off fireworks for the couple and making jests, but it's so distant for them...whereas for Katara and Zuko it's an entirely different perspective. I also appreciated your description of drinking - anyone who's ever had more than he or she should knows that feeling of being in control, yet also knowing that you're entirely drunk...you illustrated it so well! The writing just seemed to rush and blur, but also maintain a sense of intelligence that is EXACTLY that state of inebriation. Most Zutara fics are so hokey and contrived - the characters are OOC and all it takes is a kiss from Zuko's magic lips to get Katara to forget that she was (choose one) tricked, coerced, forced, or abducted into a situation where she has to sleep with him. It's good to see someone write something that isn't ridiculous. Far-fetched (aren't most?), maybe, but ridiculous, no. I know you mentioned you were concerned about OOC-ness, and I think Iroh is definitely spot-on; Zuko, too. At least the image I have of how he would end up after joining up with the Avatar and eventually taking the throne. He's still a bit outwardly emotionally stunted, but he's not incapable of expressing his feelings - cold exterior, fiery interior. Lets his guard down around Iroh in the only way he knows how - tolerating his insanity (and could possibly do the same around someone else, eventually). Katara initially seemed OOC to me, but then after I got to her background, I bought it. People change, and the way you've written her meshes with the history you gave her. I hope, though, that we get to see some of her more "tempestuous" side in the future. Thank you for writing/posting this!!!
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  • From ANON - Alauralen on December 17, 2007
    Yay! I was sooo excited to see that you had updated! Love this story and I think that this was an awesome chapter! Thank you for not waiting to post this! Please put up the next chapter as soon as you're able!
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