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Reviews for Tempestuous

By : YoukaiFate
  • From ANON - Symetrical break on January 28, 2008
    Good stuff. I wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Alauralen on January 27, 2008
    Ouch! Shouldn't he know that you can't just walk into the middle of a conversation and assume that you know what the whole thing was about? Though, that did seem pretty cut and dry. I wonder if she can convince him of whom she was really thinking about. I really feel so bad for both of them! Hopefully they will be able to come to terms and get past this quickly. Great job, as usual! LOVED this chapter! Please update again soon!
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  • From LadyKadeana on January 27, 2008
    Great chapter, I laughed out loud over Suni's reaction to poor Iroh. Katara breaking down over her father's absence was heartbreaking. Zuko seems to excel at showing up at the wrong place and the wrong time. What an evil cliffhanger to live us with. I will patiently wait for the next installment. ^__^


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  • From ANON - Nicole on January 24, 2008
    This fic is made of awesome and win and please email me when you update because I can not wait for more!
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  • From UzumakiLover on January 21, 2008
    Yay, well um this is the first review I've given to an avatar fic, and I've read so many lol I really enjoy your story I like how you go into detail with each person and show just how hard it is to adjust. I can see how you trying to keep them in check, and you even voice it with your story, Katara's need to be herself yet to change to fit the role she is now given. Its wonderful and I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Great job!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 20, 2008
    Truly a great chapter. Can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Alauralen on January 20, 2008
    Hee hee hee! I loved this chapter! Great job with the characterizations! Keep up the wonderful work and please update again soon!
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  • From ANON - svb on January 20, 2008
    kyaaaaa omg this chapter melted my insides with amazingness. *__* I kept checking back over the past week or so for a new chapter, and I'm so excited I got to read it! =) It was a great treat at the end of a long day. I don't really have a lot to offer in the way of critiques.. just know that I really enjoy this story and I look forward to reading more. =D Keep the creativity alive!!
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  • From LadyKadeana on January 20, 2008
    Great chapter!

    Poor Sifu Hotman . . .

    He has to remember that it was Aang she was saying good-bye to. It would've been so like the Aang of old to hug Zuko too, but I understand that he personalty has grown. That Sifu Hotman dig was pure Aang though.

    Katara and Zuko will have a lot to discuss on their voyage home. I can understand his hesitance in his belief that she will be loyal to him. Saying he has lived a rough life would be an understatement.

    I do hope that Sokka shows up at some point. Will Suni try to dictate the rights and wrongs to Fire Lord Zuko too? That would be a funny scene. I wonder if Aang's wives will be throwing a party now that Suni is gone.
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  • From ANON - Marcia on January 19, 2008
    thank you so much fof the update. I like the vulnerability that you have given Zuko. Cnat wait for more!!
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  • From ANON - Marcia on January 14, 2008
    Tempestuous is the best!!! I ould not stop reading. I wished you had elaborated just a bit more on the bed room scene... it was rather anticlimatic and I feel a little cheated. In all other respects I am very, very pleased and cant wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - Bee on January 10, 2008
    oh man, she is going to be pissed when she wakes up. It was her wedding night, she lost her virginity and she wakes up to find her husband gone because he went to go work on some stuff?!? Well, if he wants to create some distance between them, that act will sorely make her frosty when she sees him next.
    lovely chapter. wish there was more written on their love making but it doesn't matter, it will still an awesome chapter!
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  • From ANON - Ghost Stories on January 07, 2008
    ah, I was waiting for this story to update! Mind I haven't read many Avatar fanfictions, but of them, this is by far my favorite. Not too fast, not too slow, it gets to the point but doesn't leave us wondering if there was something we missed. (Except a LEMON SCENE. WE TOTALLY GOT GYPPED. COME ON THAT WAS UNFAIR.) I love how you write everyone's character, especially Iroh! And Katara and Zuko's awkward alliance and uncomfortable caution towards each other, coupled with unbridled lust, makes for such an interesting dynamic! I look forward to reading more!
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  • From ANON - Anono2 on January 06, 2008
    This is a great story. I love the writing and I hope to read more and that you also catch the updating bug.
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  • From Mackrel on January 05, 2008
    I really like this story. You do not have to rewrite this chapter in my book. It is great. DOT
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