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Reviews for If You Bend It, They Will Cum

By : Datalaughing
  • From SunTsuToriden on June 04, 2008
    This was amazing... please keep writing more, you have me on the edge of my seat!
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  • From SunTsuToriden on June 04, 2008
    I just finished reading chapter 10, and I have to say, this is one of the greatest Mature Avatar stories I have ever read... and It's not even finished yet! I can't wait to get into the next chapters!
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  • From zutoph on May 18, 2008
    Good job!
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  • From on May 16, 2008
    Hey man, I can't say much that hasn't already been said better by most people on this review page, which is in itself a cliche; I'm not entirely sure if this diminishes the writing quality in this review by some multiple of 6 or something. In any case, no matter how awkward my writing is, I'd like to express my appreciation of your fearless and inventive attitude towards the sex scenes in your story. The overall narrative is compelling as well, and I totally feel for you insofar as you're busy with school for regular updates. Still the story is turning kinda epic and it looks like you may have some trouble finishing it anytime soon. Cheers.
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  • From TheColeTrain on May 14, 2008
    nice to see you back
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  • From FusionBlaster on April 20, 2008
    Great story. So when we get an update?
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  • From tramblieg on December 09, 2007
    why the fuck wont u up-date?!?! im hooked i need more!!!
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  • From Spleef on December 01, 2007
    Pure genius. Love it!
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  • From FusionBlaster on November 26, 2007
    I loves me some porn with plot. And what porn with plot it is. Two men who have discovered what they are fighting for seem to be on a collision course. This is gonna get nuts. Rock on.
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  • From TheColeTrain on November 26, 2007
    I can't think of anything that I didn't like about that chapter.
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  • From TayBear on November 24, 2007
    Nice. I actually figured out that Katara was pregnant after you explained how she was sick every morning and feeling better at night. I just wanna also let you know that even though Aang's the Avatar and able to bend all the elements, it doesn't mean that their child can be an earth or firebender... Just saying! I like this. Can't wait to read the next (three) chapter(s)!
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  • From JohnMadden on November 24, 2007
    As usual great work.
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  • From Gunwild on November 24, 2007
    I liked that chapter.
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  • From HollowAngelus on November 24, 2007
    Please continue this story I will go insane not knowing how it ends!!!
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  • From stlajax on November 19, 2007
    Wow. I just finished chapter 10 and I have to say that it is amazing. The whole story is fantastic. It isn't just about the sex between the characters (which is very good by the way). It is about their feelings and challanges to their love. I also greatly appreciate the story actually continuing with the main story. It is a good perspective on how all of the characters would most likely act in this situation. Your work has helped me improve some of my own. Although I haven't posted any yet. Unfortunately for me, I have the undying need to actually finish my stories on paper before I begin posting chapters. Hopefully when I do post them, they will be as good as yours. Who knows, you might even become a fan!
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