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Reviews for Taming A Slave

By : johnrie18
  • From ANON - Lunarsilver on February 10, 2016
    Can't wait to read more maybe he could while blindfolded put up a camera without her knowin and make her say "my name is kim possible and I'm a sex slave for my master to do with as he sees fit"
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  • From ANON - Anomlov on December 28, 2011
    Holy crap! I just read this story and cant wait to see what happens next! Very well written and insane detail :)
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  • From TheDaiLi on July 05, 2009
    Well obviously the story is over now, but I figure I'll review it anyway.

    Basically; good job. This gave me alot of ideas for my own stuff, and I liked that you showed every part of Kim's breakdown rather than using some convenient plot device to bring about her enslavement. It made it feel more real, and that was a most welcome change of pace compared to most fanfics.

    I'd say it's a shame you went with a 'good end' but...I know how hard those are to avoid, and I can't blame you. Having 'bad ends' often seems like being edgy for the sake of it, particularly if it doesn't help the theme you're trying to follow. I can't say for sure what your theme was, but a good end serves it just as well as a bad one would have done.

    So...again, good job here.
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  • From ANON - jj on June 10, 2008
    I hope there's more to this. It's really good. I'm curious to see how it's going to end.
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 10, 2008
    Please update soon - this is a great story so far.
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  • From ANON - K on December 06, 2007
    Oohh plelase continue! I'm liking it and I can't wait to read more.
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  • From GhostwriterMO on October 13, 2007
    Hey we're back again.. well actually I am Ghostpen69 aka my girlfriend went to visit her sisters and family. Once again a great chapter in the story as always. If you'll give me one moment..."@#$% *&^% and @#$#$^&&*(! She was so darn close to geting away and to get help. The combination was probably her own birthday or locker combenation, lousy blue skin @$$#0(3, couldn't measure up to Ron's lifetime with Kim has to do mindgames on her. From what happen next 'help' and hope might be alot closure than we all think. Please keep up the great work and I hope you update all your great stories. Remember you pierce a piece of paper with a pen with your ideas in a story just like a carpenter hammers nails into wood to build a house.
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  • From eltf177 on October 12, 2007
    Another great pair of chapters. I've been expecting Kim to try something but you caught me by surprise. Of course Zorpox seemed to expect it...

    Anxiously awaiting the next move in this very intricate game...
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  • From on October 11, 2007
    So, I'm looking forward to the next chapter. good story so far.
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  • From bigherb81 on October 08, 2007
    Man great new chapter did not see that you coming at all I mean damn. Now I'm really anxious to see what you got planned next for Kim.
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  • From skeeve on October 03, 2007
    Very Very interesting. I have been working on a story of my own, and have plans for something similar. I will have to give your ideas more thought. The story itself is very well crafted, and has left me eagerly awaiting further installments. Keep up the great work your doing.
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  • From GhostwriterMO on September 23, 2007
    Hey sorry we're late with the review long story.., actually long vacation. (Down girl. Actually I like it on top.) Ahem sorry about that... Me and my girlfriend love your stories on FF and AFF. Please keep up the go work and I hope Kim beats Zorpox's twisted game and gets her Ron back. On seperate story but still about a story we hope to see you update your Hero's Legacy soon. Here is an interesting fact the voice actor that does Ron also did the voice for Terry Mc Genis in Batman Beyond. (just to give you some ideas) My girlfriend thinks that Kim is going to get jealous of Squirrel Girl if Ron saves her from the villians running around Middleton. But still keep the great work we all love. Please and Thank you very much.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 04, 2007
    Hi. Great job again. And extra points for including real life issues (eating, bathroom, etc). There are too many fics where a person is restrained for days, with no mention of going to the bathroom, eating, shower, etc. So bonus points on that. Looking forward to seeing where this story goes. Love the interaction between Kim and Ron/Zorpox.
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  • From GhostwriterMO on August 22, 2007
    In honest opinion your right on this chapter. Me and my girlfriend didn't like this one at all. My girlfriend did a report on the women movement to vote and women that were imprisoned and would go on hunger strike would be fed through a tube similar to that only they were forced down their throuts. This usually caused some severe damage. Ghostpen69: we know rape is a horrible thing but I hope that Zorpox doesn't hurt Kim to much mentally. GhostwriterMO: I hope Ron kicks the sadistic mental $#!+ out of him!!! But still it's a good story at surprising you while you read it.
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  • From GhostwriterMO on August 21, 2007
    Dude me and my girlfriend have been reading your work on FanFiction.net for a while and can only say that you are our favorite writer. Unfortunately we're having trouble leaving reviews on your excellent work (not from a lack of trying though). "Dark Legacy" and "Hero's Legacy" are my favorites but my girlfriend "Ms. Ghostpen69" loves "It's Good to be Bad" and I know she likes this new one. So from both of us please keep up the excellent A+ writing and please update soon.

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