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Reviews for The Conqueror

By : AdamIam
  • From ANON - Guest on May 23, 2016
    Please keep updating I'd love to see where u take this!
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  • From ANON - Kathy Quinn on September 14, 2011
    Good story...Hopefully you will continue it!
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  • From ANON - deb on October 04, 2010
    please update this story had me hooked on the first page I love the plot so far
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  • From brainfear on June 19, 2009
    Really good so far! More please!

    ch4
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  • From on November 26, 2008
    This story is awesome. I love the time it is written in and the way you write it.The speech fits the time. It is powerful and beautiful writing. Please continue OrangePeelings
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  • From theamberdragonfly on October 18, 2008
    EXCELLENTLY written. Really pulls you into the story. I look forward to more.
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  • From ANON - leea on September 28, 2008
    i really like this story... please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Keeper of Zuko's Topknot on September 22, 2008
    This is a truly intriguing story. I love how it feels like a Nordic myth, and your writing style suits that type of storytelling quite well. I hope to see more development from Katara and perhaps more emotional warmth from Zuko. I love what you've done with the Fire Royals and Toph, and I assume the monk is Aang?

    Please update soon! I know I'm looking forward to it!
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  • From ANON - Ky on August 11, 2008
    I love it! I cannot wait for the next chapter. I love the way this written please continue I think this is awesome!
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  • From ANON - teegan on July 24, 2008
    its really good i cant wait for the next update
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  • From ANON - Taramarine on July 19, 2008
    Yes, you should look into getting a beta. Some of your sentences don't even make sense.

    'She would not trade one unwanted love to be his love.'

    'It was his fire from his bending and it burned hotter then even thing she had even seen.'


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  • From ANON - RosieB on July 19, 2008
    The story line is enjoyable but would be so much better if you had a beta. Too many grammatical errors, run-on sentences and missue of commas. Otherwise good.
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  • From ANON - Novicegirl on July 18, 2008
    That was an excellent chapter! I am so happy you have decided to continue writing this. I am waiting to read more so hurry and post.
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  • From ANON - Myliana on July 17, 2008
    Saying that I am overjoyed that you have returned would be a GREAT understatement. You have to finish this I love this story because it is totally different from every other one I have read. It is weel done and I want to read more Zutara from you so get to it. I think you are Awesome at it!
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  • From Malestorm on July 17, 2008
    Bring it on! I am ready for more.
    This is AWESOME Zutara.
    BRING IT ON! Welcome back Bluflame
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