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Reviews for Slave of Egypt

By : Nathalia
  • From ninesenshi on March 02, 2019

    Hot stuff though I would apprecitae more detail in the sex scenes.  Hoping for Miriam action though I'm not really into threesomes with two guys...


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  • From ANON - a_levs on November 26, 2015
    there's not enough prince of egypt adult fic that isn't rameses/moses PLEASE keep this going!! bringing miriam into it just made things a lot more interesting.
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  • From Queen_Diamond_Serenity on April 27, 2015
    it's a shame you haven't finished this story I really enjoyed it before I clicked on it I knew it was unfinished so I wasn't going to even bother reading it but I couldn't help myself I usually don't read unfinished work all the stories I've been reading for the past couple years are already complete I don't like reading uncomplete work cuz all I do is torture myself by doing so and constantly wondering what if and what will happen next or is this offer will ever finish it I hope you consider finishing this story because the Prince of Egypt fan fictions are very hard to come by so don't let this go to waste please
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  • From ANON - Little Karma on July 03, 2012
    i love this story, i would like to see what else comes as well as see her sisters brought into it. i'm so evil for even thinking it, but i think it would add a dinamic to Moses control.
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  • From ANON - Harra on November 07, 2010
    Good use of details and the emotion you wrote was very realistic, I think the only thing I could suggest is that you use more description in the actual sex scenes, draw it out a little more. Other than that I loved it!
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 12, 2010
    great so far, can't wait to see how it progresses, please update soon
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  • From ninesenshi on March 10, 2010
    Sexy. Could use more details during the sex. It's great to read though because I imagined this scene myself when watching the movie! Keep writing.
    SailorNemesis
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 07, 2010
    wow this is pretty heavy. short sweet and to the point
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 05, 2010
    its hot! but i kind of want her to be into it too, ya know?
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  • From BlueKnight on September 24, 2009
    Not bad
    I always wondered what he would do to her if he chose to not let her go free
    I like how you worked the BDSM in there
    I always get off on that
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  • From ANON - sarivka on November 25, 2008
    Amazing. please, continue!
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  • From ANON - Cyerena on August 20, 2008
    I have to say, if the Christian God exists, I'm going to hell.

    I really did enjoy the story. It's pretty well written and I'd like to see more.
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  • From thefadednight on July 11, 2008
    nice use of the english language properly....something that others on this site for some reason cannot grasp. 5/5 (perfect story..but would like to see longer chapters.
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  • From ANON - Tahn on March 24, 2008
    I like it, can't wait for the rest. Wish he wouldn't be so rough but I guess that's what he's supposed to do in this story.
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  • From StoryJunky on November 18, 2007
    I always wondered what would happen if she got caught. I am looking forward to the next chapter.
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