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Reviews for Stranded

By : Gunwild
  • From AdamIam on April 15, 2007
    Interesting. go on
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  • From TimKai on April 15, 2007
    A decent, but unassuming plotless titillating piece of (currently) Pseudo-Smut.

    That was my thinking until the "Sokka makes fire" sentence.

    Now I can't wait for future chapters. What is it about a good dirty innuendo that makes EVERYTHING better, huh? Damn.

    Joking aside, I like your style of writing. It is very easy to get into. The fact that you actually lead into the boinking (instead of instigating it withing a few sentences or paragraphs) makes your stories more appealing to me.
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  • From ANON - Wrathchylde on April 12, 2007
    Nice. I love threesomes and this one makes as much sense as one can. Keep going.
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  • From ANON - watchful dude on April 08, 2007
    I read the story it was descent but dude what i want to know is how can you go from

    440 two days ago when I read it to almost getting 1000 hits. i do not think that is

    possible. How do you continue to receive 20 to 40 hits while everyone else scraps by.

    Hey i am not saying something is wrong here I just want to know why.
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  • From ANON - Juggalo_Mallet on April 06, 2007
    Yo just letting u know,i know where u live and im coming to your house with a hatchet if u dont hurry up and update this dam story :>
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 05, 2007
    Wow! Another amazing story. I am eager to see more of this, the threesome idea is brillant. I do not know why I kept putting off reviewing this, but I had to come and say i really love this story. I hope you will continue In Bai Shan as well. Your story Feel It was the first Avatar fanfiction I ever read, and I still have not found anyone that can equal the quality of your work. Thank you for producing another appealing and unusual tale for us to enjoy.

    Nafien
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  • From ANON - Annabell on April 03, 2007
    more i love it im hanging on every word here
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  • From ANON - Chigirl on April 03, 2007
    I can't wait to see more! Can Tylee send me a shout next chapter? I love her! Oh one more thing whens it gonna get hot?! Keep up the good work!

    Chigirl
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  • From FoggyBody on April 03, 2007
    nice story keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - Pink Blur on April 02, 2007
    a very nice story.. this has lotsa potential. You build it up quite nicely and i like the ty lee response thingie.. its fun :).. if you keep this up this is going to be one of the best stories here.. so keep up the good work(no pun intended.. or did I?)
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  • From Evilevergreen on April 02, 2007
    What a great first chapter. =D Though I am a little disappointed to see Ty Lee in the story. I just think with Mai and Sokka attitudes towards things that the would be more compatible. And speaking of attitudes, I thought Mai was a little to passionate in this. I think at some point she would have just shrugged and been like, "Whatever."

    Anyway, I can already see that this will be one of the stories I'll be addicted too. I'm off to chapter two!


    EEG
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  • From ANON - Is on April 01, 2007
    well yeah i've been looking for mai/sokka fics and threesomes are hot... so this is perfect
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  • From ANON - DITM on March 31, 2007
    Hi, new to this fanfic business, yours happened to be the first I've ever read. Yea, thanks a lot. Now i can't read anyone elses cuz they suck in comparison. Your fanfic is the most realistic, in character, and the best written smut I've ever read. Wow. This is what the creators would have written if they needed to write porn. PLEASE, hurry up with Stranded (Nice combo, by the way.) Keep up your great work.
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  • From ANON - Dan on March 29, 2007
    Awesome story! I love the sokka/Ty lee pairing, and Mai only adds to the fun. and good job keepin the characters personalities intact. more please!
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  • From Yustax on March 28, 2007
    Nice one, nice concept the 3 some with sokka, nice job update soon pls
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