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By : Gunwild
  • From on August 14, 2007
    I honestly don't think you could have made this work any better.
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  • From JohnMadden on August 09, 2007
    Booya that was beatiful baby.

    P.S Go buy some of my foot cream, it good for you.
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  • From FRANCISCO on August 09, 2007
    This is probably the best Avatar fiction I've ever read. It also help that Ty-lee is my favorite character. Love to see how it all turn out.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 29, 2007
    Man I am really enjoying this story. Please update I want to know what happens next. Could you also update your Bai Shan story some time as well?
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  • From ANON - AE on June 09, 2007
    Just got to the latest chapter. Saucy.

    I'm not used to seeing updates happen so regularly. It's rather refreshing. Usually, when there's an author I'd like to see an update from, it takes months and months; and I'm seeing a new chap seemingly every other week from you. It's much appreciated reading.

    The newest chapter has some hawt threesome goodness goin' on, but I've never been a big fan of the lez scene. For people like me, the lemony thrill comes primarily from imagining yourself in the male protagonist's place; and though I'd love to munch the rug of a haughty hotty like Mai with a cute gymnast in real life, it isn't what I'd do to them if given the chance (God willing). No, if I had my way, even Ty lee's limber body wouldn't be able to stand the next day. >:3

    It was a great way to move the story along though. I didn't think the transition of "I'm going to kill him" to "I'm going to let him fuck me" would be as seemless as it was, but I was pleasantly surprised. You're still as clever as when you started on chapter 1, and that's one of the fic's most attractive qualities: you're not just reading (or rereading rather) the tired cliches and storylines of so many other fics before it, but an original idea put together in a competent way. It doesn't hurt that the characters are likeable and fucking each other, but even without that, I'd still read it based on the premise and quality of non-lemon content. That's when you know your (lemon) fic is good: when the story can stand on its own without fanservice (sex, generic violence, ludicrous comedy, etc). That goes for most any medium too. TV's crawling with it...But I digress. The fic is entertaining and, though it has the spice of porn, it could easily be a fic I'd read without it.

    Again, kudos on a job well done. I look forward to the next chapter. :)
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  • From ANON - Z-group on June 03, 2007
    We do not have an account here but we do read alot of stories here in this fandom. Something about your stories is puzzling to us. We find that your stories have an exceedingly amount of hits that we do not think are reader generated.

    We do not know if you are writing and giving your stories hits to show that they are the most popular or what. As a result of what we think is happening,we have decided not to read anymore of your stories past , present, or future.

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  • From ANON - Z-group on June 03, 2007
    We do not have an account here but we do read alot of stories here in this fandom. Something about your stories is puzzling to us. We find that your stories have an exceedingly amount of hits that we do not think are reader generated.

    We do not know if you are writing and giving your stories hits to show that they are the most popular or what. As a result of what we think is happening,we have decided not to read anymore of your stories past , present, or future.

    Z-group


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  • From ANON - Tennin on May 26, 2007
    So far the only avatar fic I look forward to *thumbs up* cant wait to see chap 5
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  • From ANON - Emjee on May 17, 2007
    Well, you did mention that having more reviews makes the work go faster, so here you go. I like the story. A lot. So write faster (please?). I'm very fond of the Sokka/Ty Lee pairing, and a big fan of Mai, though I never imagined a threesome between them would work out so well. The thought just never crossed my mind, so I commend you on coming up with it. Also, like others have said, this story is very well-written, reasonably true to the characters (as true as can be in a sex story), and extremely hot. Bravo.

    Finally: Ty Lee, if you answer this, I'd just like you to know I think you're adorable, and would like to give you a hug.
    Sokka, if you answer this, you're my hero. It does seem, though, that you aren't using as much sarcasm as usual (probably because you're still getting comfy with the girls) and I miss it.
    Mai, if you answer this, I admire your tranquil, reserved nature (I can relate) but I'm glad to see you come out of your shell a little.
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  • From Alcaloid on May 13, 2007
    I wondered how you would bring Mai into the threesome, and now I realize how you built things up. Mai has obviosuly been badly hurt in the past, she's scared and confused by being stranded (well illustrated by her inhability to find her own food), and I suspect she suffers from bipolar syndrome. It is thus believable that once she overcame her fears she would welcome some comforting, and Sokka's treatment of her has shown her that not all men are out to take advantage of her. The thing I like most about your work is that it's not about pure lust but that feelings are an important part of the story. Tell Sokka I said 'Hi' ;)
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 11, 2007
    Okay, now this is getting really hot. I loved Sokka and Ty Lee, but now adding Mai in really makes it steamy. I eagerly await the next chapter. I love your style of writing, you provide an excellent description of the scene, making it easy to visualize. You teaser about the finale and the surprise have me wondering what you could be up to. Great job, I look forward to seeing more of your stories.
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  • From ANON - AE on May 02, 2007
    (...Continued from above bc AFF apparently thinks I'm too long-winded 0.o')

    Anyway, kudos on a good story. Just wanted to say so before I had to haul ass somewhere. Keep it up so the rest of us can keep it up (or moist - I ain't sexist ladies :P).

    Oh, that reminds me. I do have one little gripe about the latest chapter; and that's the clutter. Good dialogue, character, and scenery, but it all feels accelerated without much build up. Pacing my friend.
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  • From ANON - AE on May 02, 2007
    If one thing stands out above the rest, it's the plot and characterization (Okay, so that's two things - whatever, no time to backspace!). I'm totally getting into the whole stranded on an island with a laconic psycho and a playful nymph idea; and it's only sweetened by the promise of both being involved in a sexy romp with the male protagonist (at the same time...! YAY threesomes!!). And believable characterization is ALWAYS a plus and very much appreciated on my end. I haven't ONCE rolled my eyes reading the dialogue, and I consider myself rather critical of that sort of thing. Maybe it's because those two haven't had time in the show to fully develop character-wise, or maybe you just make perfect use of what they've given you thus far, but I do know for sure that I like what I read, and that's all that matters! :)...
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  • From Alcaloid on April 22, 2007
    Once again you balance well erotism, graphic depictions and storytelling. And I love how you depict Ty Lee, cute but able to take care of herself, and more to her than meets the eye. I love Ty Lee, my little cutie with braid. You're also doing a great job with Sokka; I've seen like 6 episodes of Avatar right now, but Sokka is my fav male character and as far as I'm concerned you're dead on with his personality.
    Diego
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  • From ANON - Archimedeas on April 18, 2007
    For the love of God, update the story!
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