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Reviews for The Dragon and the Siren

By : Spleef
  • From ANON - skylark on July 14, 2008
    again. amazing. you realy take your time makeing these. Im just stuned. this story is better the christmas for little kids. the wait takes a long time but when it dose come its worth the wait times a thousand. thank you.
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  • From ANON - Dragon Jadefire on July 14, 2008
    Wow. That was wonderful! It was like Zutara week rolled into one. Now, a couple questions. (You can PM me on my fanfiction.net account, same name, same person, or you can note me on DA. Again, same name DragonJadefire and same person.)

    1: Does Zuko's tongue turn into a dragon's tongue when he turns into a dragon? Or does it stay a normal human tongue?
    2: Can Iroh turn into a dragon? Can Sokka and Hokada turn into some merman thing?
    3: When Zuko said he "unleashed the dragon" on his own people, did he fully transform and rained a fiery death upon the Fire Lands?
    4: Will Katara become pregnant? If so, how do you plan on having Zuko react? Or since she's a goddess can she stop pregnancy if she wanted to?
    5: Can Aang turn into an eagle or a sky bison? (Personally, I think the eagel would be cool, but then again it may be a bit much for the brat).
    6: Will Katara find out that Zuko "unleashed the dragon" on his own people? If so, how would she react?
    Other things, I also thought dragons could purr like cats. Only I call it thrumming. I also always thought Zuko's normal voice was a rich tenor. I personally, love promagrante juice. Its really good. Though my parents want me to drink it in small glasses and cut it with water. Apparently its really healthy for you. Peronsally, I think dragons are more cat like then snake like. At least that's how I image them. Ooh, for good dragon references for Zuko check or Ciruelo's work. He's my favorite artist. His dragons are so...life like and realistic! I love them. There is this really sexy one in his book called The Book of the Dragon, of a dragon, with his head in the lap of his lady, who's this beautiful blonde, and she's had like no clothes on but a few iteams covering her waist and breasts, and we see her ack and like half of her butt and she's just stroking the dragon's throat....ZOMFG! I have a great idea for you. Why don't you have Katara mimic that scene. I'll see if I can find for you on google and link to you on DA. You'll love it!

    Anyways, can't wait until you update again. This wonderful.



    sincerely,
    DJ

    PS: I hope you reply.
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  • From ANON - Miribai on July 13, 2008
    I squealed with delight when I saw that you had updated. JOY. I'm so glad to see the Pomegranate aspect of the mythology finally added to the story. It makes it feel complete, but I am saddened. Both yours and Fandomme's wonderful fanfictions are coming to a close right around the time Avatar itself is ending. Its like I have nothing to look forward to anymore. :( But great beautiful, sexy, sweet chapter my dear. Take your time with more, draw this out, give us something more to look foward to now that this wonderful ride is starting to wrap up.
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  • From ANON - Panther Eyes on July 13, 2008
    ok the part were their climates had an affect on their elements... well im burning up form it and it started raining. who would had thought sex could do that? now i want to know how they are going to deal w/ hakoda? toph... we need you back!
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  • From ANON - anon. on July 13, 2008
    Best chapter yet!
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  • From LdyDarkStr on July 13, 2008
    Even better the second time, you did an amazing job,love...
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  • From ANON - Gizzie on June 14, 2008
    AGAIN
    YOUR AMAZING!
    EEE...
    ^^

    Keeep up the good work :)
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  • From ANON - Mira on June 10, 2008
    you love leaving us hanging. haha.

    still loving it~!
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  • From ANON - Bystander on May 31, 2008
    I just finished your story. I love your imagination and congratulate you on your idea, as Greek Mythology is one of my passions and I adore ATLA, putting those two together is a stroke of whimsical genius. That said, however, I need to comment on two things that have been nagging me throughout the story.

    For one, Katara’s supposedly fiery temper does not sit well with her compliance with her family. I know that eventually she rebels, and that she is supposed to be a young, sheltered and dutiful girl that only knows filial love. However, if she really had the character she is supposed to have, she would have rebelled against the smothering way sooner. I guess it would be easier to understand her actions, or lack of them, after the Court if the extent of her confusion regarding her feelings was explored more. We know everything about the feelings and complexities of that divinity of a man, the Fire God (enough to have us smoldering in our seats just reading about the guy) but we don’t really see the confusion regarding her feelings. She acts like a doormat and it does not fit the description of who she is supposed to be or her personality from the first act of the story. Which brings me to my second point: regardless of how dutiful she was regarding her father, she would not have left the guy (and all that awesome, earth shattering sex) so easily. The news are peppered with teenage girls that turn their backs on their families because of good sex. Ilsa, from Casablanca, was willing to forgo being the first lady of Czechoslovakia just because of good sex. Hell, 1000 ships were launched to destroy Troy because of good sex. People do crazy, stupid things because of good sex. What is unlikely, is people *turning away* from good sex. Of course, if you were to pay attention to me you are left without a third act, and without the emotional arc that she is supposed to go through when transitioning from girl to woman-goddess. So I guess is OK because it fits your story. But more fire from her at the Court would have made the story less predictable. Or, more exploration regarding why is she confused would have made her actions more understandable. Whatever, I enjoyed the story. I like the Dragon/Siren thing. I used to be neutral, but the zutaraness is starting to get at me. I wish the creators would explore the idea and its fascinating angles.

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  • From ANON - The Wind on May 31, 2008
    Hey, nice stories, you come up with some pretty creative stuff, keep it up, and by the way, if you can, contiue this story, its my favorite of all your stories...at least, all your stories so far.
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  • From ANON - Dragon Jadefire on May 19, 2008
    Same one from DA.

    Can't wait for the next update. I have this story on alters on Fanfiction.net so I know if you've updated it. Anyways great job. Stupid Hakoda. Love Jun and Toph. Zuko should kill Long Feng for...not apparent raeson and Jet needs to steal Sokka's...SHOELACES!!!!! XD
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  • From ANON - Dragon Jadefire on May 13, 2008
    Note me on DA if you want to reply. Anyways great chapter. Here's an idea. Have Zuko morph into a dragon when's he's extremely ultra pissed off. Because he's a god and gods can take on any shape they want. A dragon would be cool.
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  • From ANON - Doubtful Grace on May 12, 2008
    Im sorry, but these characters hardly portray Zuko or Katara. The whole Greek God thing doesnt work for me either. This all seems like a very long, unorigional romance novel. You have great spelling and punctuation though, which is more than I can say for a LOT of Zutaran stories.
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  • From ANON - Skylark on April 29, 2008
    I just love all of these. when I read it I feel the emotion like they are my own.One day I wish to be as good of a writer as you are. your writeing is pure emotion. thank you and please don't stop writing it.
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  • From zutoph on April 23, 2008
    I love this story, update soon please!!! :)
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