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Reviews for The Dragon and the Siren

By : Spleef
  • From Looneyluna on February 05, 2007
    Even your sentence structure has improved. I'm so proud! (Yes, I'm a mother, and if I get motherly from time to time... Well, that's just tough.) Anyway, this is by far the BEST Avatar fan fiction out there. Are you posting this elsewhere? Are people heaping praise at your feet like a the great conquering author that you are? The originality slays me. This is so masterfully done. To take a classic myth and to apply it to Avatar takes balls and intelligence. Yay for intelligence! One minor nitpick though... The last sentence. "He sighed softly before he whispered his name." Why is he whispering his own name? Anyway, kudos to you on your new masterpiece.
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  • From ANON - poornmiserable on February 05, 2007
    this really is a very beautiful fic....it is very creative and i look forward to reading more of it update soon and keep up the good job
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  • From ANON - Scorpinac on February 05, 2007
    Ah, how the fable writers can get the small things wrong... hehe... Oh, well. So, when will her father, Sokka, and Aang realize that she's gone? And when and how is Toph supposed to factor into all this? Looking forward to chapter 4! Laters.
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  • From ANON - Jasmin Kaiba on January 31, 2007
    Wow!This story is graet!A few days ago I found your stories and decided to read.Let's just say that I couldn't stop reading after I finished reading them all!And now that I found the time I thought why not review.Just like I like to read what other people think of my stories,I thought that for sure you'll like that as well!
    This story is looking great so far.I'm a huge fan of Greek legends and this is my favourite one, alongside the "Affair of Afrodite&Ares".Afrodite was such a slut,he,he.
    Well keep up,and I go review your other works.Bye, take care and update soon.
    Jasmin
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  • From Looneyluna on January 31, 2007
    Thank you so much for sharing your wonderful imagination with us! I know I've already told you this, but I adore this fic. You lead the Zutara ship with originality and flare. Well done! I look forward to reading more.
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  • From JLucPitard on January 30, 2007
    ch2.
    Creepy Zuko! I like the last line and the way he was all 'stalker.' Creepy, creepy. What will her family do? Aang? We'll see.
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  • From ANON - Scorpinac on January 30, 2007
    Naughty, naughty Zuko! What will Iroh think when he gets back - he does live with Zuko, right? And I think Aang and Sokka are gonna want to have words as well. And in my wonderings I forgot about Zhao, he still around, or gone with Ozai? And I'm not sure i even want to think about Long Feng in all this! Oh, well, until next chapter. Laters.
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  • From taoistelf on January 30, 2007
    I didn't know it was yours! You tricked me! You should be ashamed of yourself!"
    "And yet, I am not."

    PRICELESS!

    I love it! I love Zuko: fierce yet tender. This is very very original. I can't wait for more. I love the characters and the backdrop and all the creative details you have created in your "world." Bravo!

    More!! (please :-)


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  • From ANON - poornmiserable on January 23, 2007
    this is a very entertaining AU...i like it very much i hope you update this very soon
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  • From ANON - sasynatali on January 23, 2007
    I liked it!
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  • From ANON - Bard Child on January 22, 2007
    Wow Wow! I really liked this one! Normally, I don't read much Zutara. But I love mythology. And this caught my attention. Wonderful crafting of an Olympus for the Characters, and the Bender/Deities are very fun. I can't wait to see where you go with this.

    The Bard Child
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  • From ANON - Scorpinac on January 22, 2007
    An interesting beginning, Spleef, and I like that you did include Toph at the end, but, uh, is she the same age as Aang and Katara, or are you making her older? Wasn't quite sure about that. But still. Oh, and do I dare ask where Azula, Ty Lee, and Mai are? For the latter two, I imagine their mingling with everyone else, Ty Lee more than Mai, and for the former, I'm guessing they have Azula chained up somewhere where no one should ever be able to find her again! Hehhehheh... Well, laters!
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  • From ANON - Kayko15 on January 22, 2007
    Oooh. This one seems really good. I'm getting excited just thinking about it. I can't wait for the next chapter.
    Zuko: Neither can I. It gives a new twist to the world of Avatar as we know it.
    Me: Exactly. Anyway. Keep up teh good work. Update soon. Later. K15
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  • From ANON - chris on January 21, 2007
    Oh yeah... and love your art too. Multitalented!!!
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  • From ANON - chris on January 21, 2007
    Go Grrrl!!! This is *fresh*!

    I love it. YOu are creating a derivative but creative new world out of two very interesting and oddly compatible universes. I love it.

    Well written, well conceived and has me anxiously awaiting more. Love it. Execellent job.

    Thanks!
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