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By : Spleef

From ANON - Anon on November 04, 2007
I'm so happy you added another chapter! I can't wait for another one. I wish Zuko and Katara could meet in secret but judging how the Maidens are always hovering over Katara that would be nearly impossible.
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From ANON - Anon. on November 04, 2007
Yay for updates! i really liked this chapter and the Long Feng/Katara interaction. Hope things turn out well for Z & K in the next chapter!
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From Scorpinac on November 04, 2007
Okay, still more to tell. So Mai and Ty Lee are Nymphs/Dryads/Naiads/etc., huh? Okay. Poor Mai, though, Zuko really was overly harsh. On the other hand, go ladies, way to smack Long Feng a good one! Yeah, I liked that. Hehhehheh. Well, looking forward to the next installment when your done with it. Laters.
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From ANON - Sargonie on November 04, 2007
Yay! Update! Poor angsty Zuko. Things just never go right for that boy, though. I thought it was interesting how you brought Mai into this story, truth be told, I hadn't thought about her at all in Capture of the Maiden. So that was neat. Will we ever discover how Azula went out? And I really really liked how Katara called up that storm without even thinking about it. It really gives her an aura of power, especially because when you wrote the parts about Hakoda and Pakku making storms and extending the ice, you made it sound like (or at least I remember it as) they did it intentionally. So the way Katara did it without even thinking was really awesome. And it sounds like Katara is still very confused, but like she's getting more confused in the right direction (i.e. The direction that leads her back to Zuko). So I'm glad to hear that. Thanks for updating! Please get to Kiss of Fire soon too! The suspense is killing me! You are my favorite avatar author, please keep up the good work.
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From ANON - LdyDarkStr on November 03, 2007
I am loving this! I've been reading it, and I just can't get enough. The imagery is excellent and how you are using the myth is pure genius! Update soon, as well as your other fics, I enjoy them all!

~Lady~
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From ANON - Monkey D. Robbie on November 03, 2007
Spleef this is my first time reviewing any of your works but, let me say that I am a hugee, I mean HUGE fan of your work man. Seriously my brother you have a gift for storytelling & writing. I know you may feel a little bum that not many people have been writing reviews or leaving behind a few comments, but don't let that discourage you man from writing such great fics especially Zutara. I know you may also feel a litte under aprreciated but writing & storytelling should be and I blieve is your passion. I know you love comments, replies, & reviews. But you should your fics & story no matter what, because its what your excited about and passionate about. You should write your fics for yourself first & for the fans of your fics and the shows your base them on second. I mean no disrespect by what I write thats just my opinion & take on you stituation.

With that said here is my review on this chapter of Capture of the Maiden. Dog let me tell you when I saw Mai's name as the first word in this chapter and reading further into this chapter I was saying to myself "What the MAIKO shipping invading Zutuara NOOOOOO!!!!". Seriously I have nothin personal against Mai & Zuko being together it just is your fics have really turned me into a true blue & red Zutara fan man. That is how loyal I am to the fanbase. But you know after these new Avatar episode and seeing their relationship. "DAMN" was all I could say because those two look like they really, dare I say love each other and look almost like they belong together man. From the first time they kiss, all the way to the beach episode I said "DAMN" because its making a MAIKO fan, and I am starting to question my loyality to ZUTARA.

Anyway Zuko wasn't interested in her so that renewed my faith that Zuko & Katara could still hook up together. But damn I know Zuko pining for Katara but, he didn't Mai that bad, especially considering how Mai has true feelings for Zuko and really cares about him & how she was willing to comfort Zuko, you know probably more than just in the bed. Did Zuko ever consider Mai's feelings? Or even if she had any? So I feel a little bad about the way she got treated.

And now for Hakoda. I can understand the role of a father and everything. Not wanting to see his little girl hurt or taken advantage of but man dat nigga is too over protective.

As for Long Feng, excuse my french but dat nigga is a mother fucking bitch ass nigga for what he was trying to do to Katara. I was pissed the whole time I read that part of the story. When I was reading dat I was afraid, I was afraid dat when the Dai Li showed up Katara was gonna snatched up by Long Feng and taken to Ba Sing Se. And den all hell would break loose Hakoda would mad & Zuko would probably be so pissed he'd burn Ba Sing Se to the ground. But thankfully Katara kicked Long Feng's little monkey ass.

Spleef this was a great chapter man continue to produce smash hit after smash hit man.

But I do have some questions and concerns after reading dis chapter. The whole thing with Bato desiring Katara, I know there is nothing between them, but my greatest fear is Hakoda. What if Hakoda gives Katara hand in marriage to Bato just to keep home, safe, & stuff. I mean I know Bato is considered their "uncle" but really ain't no blood between dem. What if Hakoda does that? How will Zuko and Katara react to such actions?

Mind you all of this is speculation, I have no intention for this to be story possibilities. But I you decide to create a chapter or anything from these speculations I would feel honored that my comment/review contributed to such a great sorry like Capture of the Maiden.

Also I being going back to old chapters and other fics you wrote to add my two cents on them.

Until next time continue to write for the fun of it man. Don't discourage yourself and don't let other discourage you, even if I am one of them.

Peace
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From ANON - Scarylady on November 03, 2007
"Bato helped to pull Katara off of the slick Earth God, who had been subject to a first-class ass-whipping from the irate woman." ^_^ *giggles*
Oooh, somehow I get the feeling that Long Feng's strategy has backfired in more than one way. His words *could* just drive katara to go see Zuko...
Yay for updating! :D
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From ANON - Panther Eyes on November 03, 2007
long feng u bastard. katara loves zuko... y cant she just tell her father that? the storm in her wont settle until she admits it because her heart belongs 2 zuko just like his heart belongs 2 her. hakoda open yuor eyes n realize that zuko was never like his father n dont think about considering bato as a possible suitor 4 katara.
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From ANON - xosuccubusdreams on November 03, 2007
i loved the new chapter can't wait till you update again
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From ANON - SnowFlakeAlchemist on November 03, 2007
Yeah!!! An update!! I love this story, and was so happy to see the next chappie up. Please update again soon, I can't wait to read how the Water Tribe reactes to her true feelings...
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From ANON - poornmiserable on October 27, 2007
awesome... is it almost gonna finish i hope not keep up the great work and update soon
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From ANON - Anon on October 25, 2007
Noo! Please tell me you're going to write more! I'm hooked; your story flowed so smoothly it was like I was actually reading an epic and you went into such detail with your characters!
I need more!
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From ANON - skylark on October 21, 2007
I realy do enjoy this fanfiction.I canot wait for the next chapter. the character devlepoment in this story is truly amazing. how you see Kataras haterid for Zukko turn into a need for him. everyone else and how thaey afect the stroy: Iro and his words of wisdom. Angs rage and even the wise Tophs out look on the hole situaction. I canont wait for the next chapter. I always have been and will be waiting on every word of this stroy. please dont stop making this masterpice. If you do you are dipriving the world of one of its greatest treasures. (I am sorry for spelling and gramar mistakes)This is one of the things that keep me going through my day.
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From ANON - Bee on September 30, 2007
I absolutley love your story but I`m not really liking Katara right now...I mean I know she`s confused but she was pretty much silent through the whole proceedings, I mean she could have at least thrown a bone at Zuko..poor guy he looked devastated.

``The Water Goddess paused by a tree, and leaned against it as she stared out at the sky, feeling the crisp air on her face. If Toph was here, she didn�t know whether she should thank or curse the blind goddess. Part of her was relieved that she could choose by herself. But, oh! What a difficult choice it would be � it would be easier if it had been decided for her.`` Yeah I know it would be easier for her but she has to stop being spoiled and stand up for herself and the least she could have done was tell Aang to mind his own business! LOL.
oh what if Katara is pregnant...that would be an interesting twist.
I love this story and I can`t wait until you update!!

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From ANON - Lunar84 on September 25, 2007
"He wanted to make love to her in every position and reduce her to a pile of thoroughly-sexed Water Maiden mush." Best. Line. Ever.

Wonderful as usual Spleef. It amazes me because everytime i try to review one of your wonderful stories, I can't seem to put the right words together to express just how wonderful and brilliant both you and they are. So then I feel like a noob. I truly wish there were more writers with the talent you posses. It's almost painful reading some of the trash that's in the fanfic world today. I don't need to tell you you are doing a great job with this story because everything you write is golden. I look foward to more updates!

also on a side note just wondering how you got into reading and writing fanfiction. Oh and one more thing, are they any other types of Fanfics that you enjoy reading? other than Avatar of course. Are there any that you enjoy, but haven't gotten a chance to put your own spin on?

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