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Reviews for Slow Heat

By : Spleef
  • From Zarrthtion on September 26, 2009
    Your story is just amazing to say the least i've been reading it on&off for the last two days and im on chap.29 your use of the storyline has ventured far beyond some of the things i've thought of and their so great every time i think of writing you a review i get caught up in the next chapter and i must say sorry for that because you should be praised for you work. and i must say that i can't wait to finish this story and read more of your works. and i hope that no matter what you keep on writing even if you don't post anything i guess i would hope that somewhere someone reads your work its truly good....and i guess thats all for now i'll write again in a few more chapters..:)
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  • From ANON - 3453ysdft on September 25, 2009
    wait.....she's actually dead!?!?!?!?!
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  • From CoffeeGyrl on September 24, 2009
    Waaaaa!! I know this is not the true end but it still kills me to read. I adore what you did with Azula. You gave her the respect of the truly great villianess she was. I think of Azula like Melficent from Sleeping Beauty, she didn't go down like a punk either. I don't think the show did her the justice it should have, a great villian is needed for a great hero, and Azula was great, better than her old man.

    I love what you did with Sokka and the Wang Fire mention was always loved. Nice use of Toph as well and of the others. I enjoyed the differences in the burials of the cultures and I liked the mentions of the decor (like the Agni statue) and of the clothes.

    I loved this story so much, I always liked seeing a new chapter added but am bittersweet about the ending. Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful writing with us, I'm so glad that people like you are in this world.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 23, 2009
    So sad D:

    Well written but very sad. I eagerly await the alternate ending lol
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 22, 2009
    Whyyyyyyyyy
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 11, 2009
    Oh noes! What happens next? D:

    To be perfectly honest: this is my first time reading an Avitar fanfic--and now I have a sneaking suspicion that I will be extremely picky if/when I go look for more lol. I love the fact that you have an original plotline *gaspies* that blends with the one already in place--even with tweaks here and there =3

    Then again, if you change from the original story too much--I'm not going to notice because I can't get my hands on any episodes beyond Book 1 D,=

    I'm not sure what I want you to update more--this fanfic or Darkness Becomes Her xD;;

    Keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - sdfn on September 04, 2009
    OH NO!!!!!
    what happened please you can't just cut me off like that
    i hate cliffhangers

    great chapter!!!
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  • From ANON - Syntric on August 22, 2009
    After i found this story on FF, I couldn't pull myself away, a bit disappointed that it was only 19 chapters long at first.
    But when I came to chapter 15, with the mention if a different site with this story, I let curiousity take control.
    Am I glad I did.

    This is one of the best written, most thought out stories I've read on any fanfiction site. I couldnt helpp but re-read the first 15 chapters and continue on to the most recent one.
    But Now I have to beg that you update soon. Cliffhangers and I, we aren't on friendly terms.

    Any-who, amazing job and I'll be waiting for the next chapters.
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  • From ANON - cookie on August 20, 2009
    this was a great chapter
    I just wish you focused more on emotions in this chapter when Zuko got shot with lightning and Katara had to heal him.
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  • From ANON - megumi07 on August 19, 2009
    I'm so sad... that part of the story was... I don't know how to describe it. I know it was necesary but I really hope the other endind for Slow heat.

    Even them, I think that this is your best story. This chapther was amazing (even with the sad parts). Already, I'm waiting the next part.

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  • From ANON - Michelle on August 18, 2009
    Just wanted to drop you a line and say that this story is great so far! I've spent the last couple days reading it, and was so upset to see that it stopped there! Noooo! Please update soon! But anyway, I love the banter that you produce between Zuko and Katara, and the way that you write Aang. You have him dead on, in my mind he's just as whiny and immature. One of my favorite lines that still makes me chuckle from a few chapters back was when Aang caught Zuko kissing Katara. Something like : "Zuko was kissing her! What else? Hugs? Definitely! What else? Whatever boyfriends and girlfriends do.." I know that's not quite it, but it cracked me up. Anyway, keep up the great work!
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  • From CoffeeGyrl on August 16, 2009
    AAAAAAHHHHHHHH! Oh dude I'm mollifing myself right now with the promise that 'Kiss of Fire' is but just the same I'm on pins and needles. I really should be studing for my final tommorrow but I just can't help reading your story. I really do enjoy all of your work.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 16, 2009
    ZOMG!!!!
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  • From eoNbluesaturNalia on August 16, 2009
    omg! evil woman! such a cliff hanger. great chapter though, i loved it ;)
    please more soon! you have to finish is... both of them!
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  • From AnimeFantasyFan on August 10, 2009
    Wow, this is such an awesome story!!! I love how you've been dedicated enough to see our beloved couple through the entire season!

    It makes me really sad that Slow Heat is destined to have such a sad ending, after they've gone through so much (it seems like I've seen nothing but bittersweetness from the fandom lately).

    Or are you planning on making this like the Cold Fire arc, and allowing Kiss of Fire to be an "alternate ending"?

    Argh! I wanna know, but that would spoil everything, wouldn't it?

    Thanks for a great story (for all of them), and doing what Bryke couldn't (because we all know Nickelodeon would've burst into sexy, sexy flames if it had happened in canon).

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