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Reviews for Slow Heat

By : Spleef
  • From ANON - Kim on May 19, 2008
    Nice. Keep Up the good work! Hurry up and update this is getting good!
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  • From ANON - Ishi the Earthmover on May 17, 2008
    Wow! A Zuko-with-the-GAang-fic that's actually in-character and well-written. :D

    I eagerly await more chapters!
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  • From Darkwolf01 on May 11, 2008
    Well i'm glad you're continuing with this. It's a good story, and Katara and Zuko are coming to head i see. I like the new chapter and hope you'll update soon. But please, please don't continue with this look on reviews. Everyone likes reviews, who doesn't, but you can't guarantee that you'll always get them. And if you stop writing the story, then what about the people who have reviewed? Are they not good enough to continue the story for? Are they just irrelivant until you get enough reviews so you can continue? And how many reviews does it take for you to keep going?

    You might not be getting reviews because people are busy and haven't gotten to it yet, or they could have had somthing come up and forgotten to go back and do it, or they're simply lazy. People have lives outside of fanfiction, as i'm sure you have yourself and i'm sure you know this. Keep going anyway, and good luck with whatever reviews you do get that you deem worthy enough for the next chapter.

    Wolf
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  • From stealthfic on May 09, 2008
    Beautiful! Write more please! :)
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  • From ANON - Spleef Addict on May 09, 2008
    Your stories are what keep me sane during these Avatarless monthes, I was wondering if you were going to incorperate Katara's bloodbending though....Cause it would be funny for her to mess around with Zuko lol.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 08, 2008
    I absolutely love this story! Im sorry I haven't reviewed until now. But, seeing as they are of extreme importance to you (good thing btw) i shall be doing it more. keep up the good work spleef! you are a very talented author.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 08, 2008
    I absolutely love this story! Im sorry I haven't reviewed until now. But, seeing as they are of extreme importance to you (good thing btw) i shall be doing it more. keep up the good work spleef! you are a very talented author
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  • From CoffeeGyrl on May 08, 2008
    I love, love, love this story! I was very happy to see it updated. I liked Zuko's thoughts on 'rise with the sun' that was so great. MMm so ZuZu is being a naughty boy, very nice. And a big thank you for giving me the shirtless Sokka/Zuko sword fight that I wanted. If I could see this in the anime I would die a happy woman. I like how you're shaping everyone up, and Zuko's practical nagging is sweet.

    I'm still liking earnst/angsty/aroused Zuko, very nice and you're doing a cool job having Katara's hormones betray her. The small niceties like giving them both water is sweet.
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  • From zutoph on May 07, 2008
    Things are starting to heat up. I am really enjoying this. :)
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  • From LdyDarkStr on May 06, 2008
    The tension builds...and isn't it soooo good. I love the intricate dance that you have Katara and Zuko in, and how they, just like they should be at their age, are conflicted about their feelings and reactions. Fantastic job.
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  • From ANON - Anon. on May 06, 2008
    things are heating up! good job!
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 03, 2008
    I am a fan of the tv show, and I usually don't like fanfiction when it deviates from the plot line in the show, but I am really enjoying reading this story! Your writing is descriptive and engaging. Keep up the good work!
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  • From zutoph on April 26, 2008
    Aagh! Forced... to... review!!!

    I like this story. I like how it follows the storyline so far. Really awesome!! I want to read the rest ::begs:: PLEASE!!!
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  • From HitomiBrighteyes on April 22, 2008
    Ahh... Even with the unexpected twist that was Zuko turning back to the fire side to help Azula, this is exactly what I wished the canon would have done. (Granted I have a Zutara bias, but oh well.)

    Overall I have to say it's very interesting read. Granted, I'm not the biggest fan of first person perspective, but for the most part the transitions flow fairly straight-forwardly, even if there is a little choppy-ness at times. The character POV labels help mucho big time. On the flip side, I especially like how you're taking the the time to touch slightly on the original episodes with the AR tweak - stealing fire nation garb, the Painted Lady, and such.

    I'll be curious to see how else you play with things. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Lu on April 21, 2008
    More More More!... Lorve it... cant wait for them to hook up with all the building tension inside... itll cause one h*ll of an explosion. :)
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