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Reviews for Slow Heat

By : Spleef
  • From InkHeart17 on July 08, 2008
    I'm glad you took my suggestion about reaching for her hand in the argument. This is my favorite chapter so far and me wants moarrr!
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  • From LdyDarkStr on July 07, 2008
    SQUEEE! Hot angry monkey sex indeed!! I was most heated!!! Absolutely excellent JOB! I cannot wait until the next chapter. It was all there, the raw emotion, the lust, the plain need. All conveyed with eloquence and poise. GREAT JOB. Now. MORE!!
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  • From ANON - MistressJacky on July 06, 2008
    Wow. I've been reading this story for quite a while now, although I stopped after ch 11 or 12, where you left off before continuing after the season began. Your story has me at the edge of my seat, mostly this chapter. Its been great, but this one was just awesome. You've made everything fit in perfectly, and I love the way it just keeps on going. My deep apologies for never reviewing, when I began reading Slow Heat I was at the library. And well, you know the drill... Not only did I feel uncomfortable typing in the site name on the browser, but also when the usual "Are you over 18?" question popped up too many people looked my way. But now I have a new laptop, so its all good now! Let me just say that you are by far the best Avatar writer in AFF. Good think you're a Zutarian. lol. Anyways, keep them coming. I'll be waiting faithfully.
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  • From ANON - Mira on June 26, 2008
    yay! update! we missed thee~!

    story's getting warmer...though the spaces are still there @_@
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 24, 2008
    Nice story
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  • From Datalaughing on June 19, 2008
    I just read through this whole thing. Haven't read it before because it's not a pairing that I'm a big fan of, but you do the first person narrative thing really well. So I thoroughly enjoyed it.
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  • From ANON - Alicia on June 18, 2008
    Personally, I found this story to be truly well done. The way you stuck with the main episodes story lines, then enriched them with your own is wonderfully constructed. The dialog and extra events are believable and enjoyable. I hope you will continue it.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 18, 2008
    realy amazing
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  • From CoffeeGyrl on June 17, 2008
    This was the way the Puppetmaster epi. should have gone. I loved the face biting, nice touch, and the fight was off the hook great.

    I like the type of different women Zuko's thinking of, its nice for him to appricate the female forn in all its gueises. Love the 'hiss of apprecation', and adore him hissing flame. I so think of that as your trademark Zutara style, love it. I like the 'gently rumpled hair' cute and tender. I love you showing Zuko's tender side in delicate niblets, not too much but enough to totally keep him in character.

    The bit with Toph was very sweet and very well done. I'm adoring this story and can't wait for the next instalment. If you felt like giving us a nibble on LJ like you did last time that would be awesome. I was totally rereading that part till this chapter came out, yummy, yummy, yummy.
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  • From ANON - anon on June 17, 2008
    superb! love the gradual switch from zuko's fantasy to zuko's perceived reality with katara; that was well-written. Good chapter overall!
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  • From ANON - ray on June 17, 2008
    wow. i thought the real episode was intense enough
    but wow. it was amazing.

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  • From ANON - Mira on June 09, 2008
    oh and can i add something? the way-too-big spaces are kinda irritating. is there something wrong with the spacing itself or do i have to adjust something? thanks! please do continue~!
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  • From ANON - Mira on June 09, 2008
    please continue~! i love the story~!
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  • From ANON - What the... on June 03, 2008
    Seriously, I hate the way you portray zuko in this...but I can't stop reading.
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  • From ANON - What the... on June 03, 2008
    Yo, nice story, creative, imaginative and fairly well written...now, that a side, YOU MADE ZUKO INTO A TOTAL BITCH
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