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Reviews for Slow Heat

By : Spleef
  • From Adridere on August 05, 2008
    I forgot to add to my previous review that I love the sexy smexy reconciliations in your stories. Can't wait for this one.
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  • From Adridere on August 04, 2008
    Aawww!!!! This was sweet... I love the conversation through the door, with their backs against the wall. When you don't see the other's face, you can afford vulnerability and honesty. Keep updating!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 04, 2008
    i like the spinoff u did on season 2 and season 3
    its really interesting
    and u really kept to character on zuko
    not many people do that
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  • From ANON - Danielle on August 03, 2008
    Wow that was a great way to end the chapter. I really wished that the Avatar team had you as one of their writers. Maybe the outcome would've been much better than it was (not that the finale was bad, but it was lacking...) I really like how you make sure to express each person's feelings thoroughly and with a lot of thought behind their words. I feel this is what truly brings a character to life, and this is the true art of writing, succeeding to make the reader feel what the character is feeling, and you did just that. Thank you for sharing your fanfics with us. It has really brought me out of my Avatar depression.
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  • From ANON - Coffee Gyrl on August 03, 2008
    Oh and did I forget to mention that this was totally hawt! I love the mentions of Iroh courting, that was very cute and sweet.

    The thinking while in slime was funny and I liked the fire lilly.
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  • From stealthfic on August 03, 2008
    Lurve it! Now that the conflict is done... more smut, waffy hot smut... pweeeeeeeeees
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  • From ANON - Sibella on August 02, 2008
    OMG MORE!!!! you had to leave it that didn't you spleef -_-. Jk. I love this story and Can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Coffee Gyrl on August 02, 2008
    Aww this was so cute, I'm loving how you're developing this story. I really like the realisim that this is awkward and unsure. That's so sweet and cute, and I like the pacing and flow.

    You're doing a great job switching between their prespectives and bringing in the different backgrounds. It would make sense that the Water tribe with the 'betrothal' practices that Katara would be feeling very gulity about her people's traditions and Zuko would have a very different view.

    I really adore this story and you're my cannon. Thank you for updating so quickly!
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  • From ANON - Coffee Gyrl on July 31, 2008
    I never get tired of rereading this story. Your Zutara fics are my cannon. I'm so happy that I can revisit them so often. Thank you so much for putting so much time and energy and care into this art and bring me so much pleasure.
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  • From ANON - oris-moris on July 30, 2008
    BRILLIANT Story. Can't wait to start reading the sequel to this. Hope you update this one soon. Great job.
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  • From ANON - Fafi on July 29, 2008
    if i haven't said it before, i'll say it again...i love your realism that results from both the original story line and the fruits of your own creativity...i was soo happy when you decided to take the more realistic approach regarding their relationship than making everything all honkey-dorey after their one "confrontation"

    keep up the great work, and i can't wait for your next chappie!
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  • From ANON - fafi on July 29, 2008
    oooo..i like the darkness in this chappy...
    very good story, keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Lilly on July 28, 2008
    i love your incorporation of the third season! the way you manage to make the story flow with both the original AtlA as well as your original ideas is very refreshing!
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  • From Jacika on July 28, 2008
    Really great work with this chapter, but after watching the final episode of the series once again, I wanted to scream. Why Mai? What the hell does he see in her? I was so happy when she hugged him, when he saved her life, when she defeated Azula just so she could help him and of course when he asked for her help to defeat Azula. Those were Zutara moments any fan would have loved and then they go and shatter it with him taking Mai back and Aang and Katara? A joke, a sick joke. I could cry right now... But it's my own fault I guess, I always seem to support non-canon pairings. On the other side I'd don't always get disappointed. I'm still waiting for Naruto to end, but I'm positive that Sasuke and Sakura will make it, Yu-Gi-Oh! ended rather open, and who says fans can't use imagination to bring Kaiba and Anzu together? I know I will.
    Well great job, please update soon and Kiss of Fire too, I LOVE that story. Oh and lovely chapter on Capture of the Maiden.
    I'll try to review all new updates, but I've been awfully busy.
    Good Luck,
    Jas
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  • From ANON - lena on July 25, 2008
    loved it
    please update soon
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