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Reviews for Slow Heat

By : Spleef
  • From ANON - Lola on September 06, 2008
    Hey awesome update! Can't wait for more!
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  • From CoffeeGyrl on September 05, 2008
    Ok that's it you are my new cannon on what really should have happened in Avatar. I just rewatched the ending and had the same effect between Matrix 2 and 3 (they said it would end one way and pulled a lame switch). Your stories make the brain pain go away.

    You are my cannon, baby!
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  • From CoffeeGyrl on September 04, 2008
    Squeee! So cute and sweet. I love Zuko's mentioning that he wanted her when he tied her to the tree, nice omage there. This was flowing and growing, they are becoming an evolved couple and you're doing a great job.

    The thrill of keeping it a sceret is interesting and I'm really enjoying this. I liked Zuko thinking how Sokka would benifit from formal education, its nice to see him thinking like a good ruler.
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  • From moor on September 04, 2008
    *^__^* Such a happy chapter! (Thank you for including such a nice, almost smoldering chapter in this great story!)

    And I bet you will have them sparring more... or perhaps wrestling more, *cough cough*.

    ;)

    (One thing I caught, though: I always thought it was "To the victor go the spoils", since the spoils go to the victor. I notice you wrote it with 'goes' instead of 'go' -- how come? Is there another rule about that expression I missed? Sorry to bug you!)
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  • From ANON - Caterfree10 on August 24, 2008
    HOLY FREAKIN CRAP, this story is AMAZING!! I am loving this story thus far!! MOAR SOON, PLEASE!!! *runs off to read more fanfiction from you*
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  • From theamberdragonfly on August 22, 2008
    YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!!!! More hot steamy lovin' (pun intended) from our Yin and Yang couple!
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  • From theamberdragonfly on August 22, 2008
    YES!! YES!!! Frenzied, crazy, animalistic sex!! BRAVO!! That was AMAZING! And I'm sure Zuko and Katara are thinking the same thing. XD
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  • From ANON - Adridere on August 21, 2008
    I loved the chapter. So sweet and passionate. I hope you keep updating this story with LOTS of smutty make up sexin while these two get to know each other really-really well. A special request: PLEASE don’t make this story the prequel to Kiss of Fire. I don’t want either of them dying, even if she reincarnates. PLease, give them a sexy happy ending. I’m a total wuss, I love happy endings.
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  • From ANON - Lola on August 20, 2008
    Wow. This is a great story! I can't wait for the next update! ^^ Long live Zutara!
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  • From moor on August 20, 2008
    Ok. Don't take this the wrong way -- but I think this chapter is the single-best-written chapter you've ever written for any of your Avatar fics. :)

    The interaction between Katara and Zuko in the bath, the building of their trust into friendship, and then into a realistic transition to intimacy, was absolutely amazing (and you did it and made it read so naturally!!!). That was amazing!

    (Also, Zuko appearing after K says goodnight to Aang and pulling her into the darkness while he says, "Sleep with me," is HOT. Seeing Zuko vulnerable but open with Katara is such a great mark and maturity of his character.)

    Great job, thank you so much for sharing!!! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Nightstar on August 17, 2008
    Awww! I really liked that ending! I think Zuko's gentle side is what started the whole Zutara fandom in the first place. :)
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  • From ANON - Keeper of Zuko's Topknot on August 16, 2008
    Great chapter!! Keep writing!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 16, 2008
    Omnomnomnom!
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  • From ANON - Raycel on August 15, 2008
    great chapter and lemon!
    it was so steamy :p
    can't wait to see how they get closer and closer to each other
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 15, 2008
    Foot play. Scar-rubbing. Sex in the bathtub. Honestly, this scene is pretty damn hot... Go Zutara! Go Spleef!
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