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  • From ANON - artfullyoutuvit on February 25, 2009
    i think this story is really great! i love the mix of plot lines
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 23, 2009
    Really really good please do update again soon!!
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  • From ANON - shan on February 08, 2009
    I'm not very good at constructive criticism when the piece is good! the only thing i can think is a couple spelling errors!
    i really enjoy your stories and can say with all honesty, i am hopelessly addicted! you're a great writer and i hope you continue with your great stories. i've really enjoyed all of Slow Heat. i really enjoy the character interaction you've developed in addition to the continuing story line. keep it up!
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  • From ANON - morwen re on February 07, 2009
    Loved it! Awesome dialog with Sokka and Chitshag. Nearly fell off my chair and caused my friend to think I was insane until I explained.
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  • From ANON - bleeker on February 05, 2009
    more lemon please :]

    but I love how the story is coming along

    update soon ^_^
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  • From ANON - Tilenna on January 27, 2009
    I really do love the way you stick to the bones of the original story while making it your own. This is hands down the best Avatar stories I've ever read! I can't wait to look at the others you've written. If they're all of this caliber I know I'm going to love them. Keep up the good work, I can't wait for an update!
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  • From ANON - Laraine on January 27, 2009
    Hello there! I just stumbled upon this story on your last update, and I must say, I love it! Oh, the plot you're developing is so well written, as are your characters. It's not often you see an author that can actually keep their subjects in character whilst having them do things that are completely out of.
    I truly enjoy reading your work and I hope you're able to update this story again very soon. But, please, no rushing! Such talent takes time, of this I am sure.
    Thanks for submitting such wondrous work,
    Laraine
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  • From CoffeeGyrl on January 25, 2009
    I enjoy rereading this story.
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  • From ANON - The End on January 24, 2009
    Every time I read your stories your writing skills seem to get better, keep it up
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  • From CoffeeGyrl on January 24, 2009
    I very much like how you had Zhao be the one to kill Kaya, very nice. And the first thing that I thought when I saw that episode was that someone in that small village sold out Katara's family. I very much liked your Puppetmaster as well. One of the things that I'm enjoying so much about this series is that you are healing the wounds left by my disatifaction in the last season. You're making this a richer more mature and realistic story and I am seeing your story in my head like it was the true ending.

    Lemme tell you how much I love this line “How'd you like to stick it to the Fire Lord and bring peace to the world?” I adore how you write Sokka. And Poppy is a wonderfull fire nation name I liked it.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 23, 2009
    aaahhhh! the anticipation is killing me! but I really enjoyed this last chapter. I'm glad Chit Sang joined the cause...
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  • From ANON - Winters Avatar on January 23, 2009
    Another amazing chapter! The tension is slowly building! I can't wait to see what happens next ^-^
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 15, 2009
    I think what you did for Chit Sang's backstory was fantastic. I thought it was kinda weird that his eyes were blue and that they never explained his crime or shit.
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  • From CoffeeGyrl on January 15, 2009
    I love how you're taking this story. And the whole Saffire Lee thing is so cute. Love Wang Fire, very nice to get a shout out to the rest of the Gaang. The ice play was very smexy I loved it.
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  • From ANON - lavenderhilllove on January 14, 2009
    Thanks for updating! I love your stories!!!! ^_^
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