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Reviews for Slow Heat

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  • From eoNbluesaturNalia on June 30, 2009
    oh, what a great chapter! lovin' the smexy ;) i really enjoyed the intimacy you depicted also, i'm really looking forward to the next chapter... and wondering if strawberries will pop up in kiss of fire, hmmm? ;)
    the only critical things i can mention in the story is one spelling mistakes and a couple 'an's instead of 'a's... other than that, good stuff! keep 'em coming lady!
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  • From ANON - Xia Cheyenne on June 29, 2009
    Hello!
    I have read most of your Zutara fanfica and I have to say that I am hooked! Capture of the Maiden is definitely one of my all time favorites now...I love how you incorporated the Dragon and Siren themes into the story...it fits them perfectly. The Hades/Persephone story line is also a perfect fit. I have to say though, I am not behind any Aang and Katara AT ALL! LMAO They are so much alike and he is too young minded to deal with the trials of being a teenager that a match like that just can't work for me. :)
    Anyway, I also love Slow Heat and anxiously await for the next installment, and I am glad you put this link on fanfiction...now I can find good clean smut (which I am really good at writing!)
    And just as a shameless plug...I haven't written a fanfic for Avatar as of yet, and of course it will be a Zutara, but I do have a few ideas...I have to first finish my other stories which I have written in my first love, VOLTRON. You can check me out on fanfiction...would love any more reviews...end of shameless plug! LMAO
    Keep up the good work and I look forward to hearing from you...and waiting for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 23, 2009
    FANTASTIC!
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  • From CoffeeGyrl on June 23, 2009
    Awww so sweet and warm. I agree with the EIP episode was pure fan service but they didn't go far enough, they should have had actor Zuko kiss actress Katara. That would have made my day.

    'I didn't think anyone would ever.... care for me as a man.' Lemme tell you this line totally made me warm and gooey, I adore this line.

    Thank you so much for updating so quickly! New chapters always bring a smile to my face:)
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  • From ANON - fhksfjsakjf on June 22, 2009
    ooooooooo I can't wait!! But You should have made Zuko kick the avatar's ass or Katara should have gotten pissed at him!! Well hurry and update Please!!!!
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  • From ANON - UL on June 22, 2009
    very sweet chapter
    thank you for updating so quickly
    and thank you for being so dedicated and detailed to this story
    im looking forward to the rest of the chapters
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 21, 2009
    I never realized how many inconsistencies there were in the TV ep of the play... nobody in-universe would have known that much about the Aang Gang. Fascinating. And well-done! (for you, not them)
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  • From ANON - D on June 16, 2009
    I love the story and the interaction between the two. I hope you keep writing!
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  • From CoffeeGyrl on June 16, 2009
    Aww the ending made my go all mushy. I liked the small physcial details like the hair fliping, in keeping the charaters very well in form. I love your work and always squee when I see any new update. Thank you very much for making me smile so much:)
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 16, 2009
    I love it!!! What a wonderful story. I especially like that their love takes time. I have read way too many Zutara stories where its two paragraphs in and they're both like "OMG I love you so much- I have since the first time I saw you!!" Its refreshing to read a slow-growing love.

    I'm sorry many readers have not been reviewing.
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  • From ANON - Danielle on June 15, 2009
    I really really enjoy reading Slow Heat and Kiss of Fire! These are the best Zutara fanfictions I've had the pleasure of coming across ever since I discovered the shipping between the two benders. Although the stories aren't complete yet, I still find myself going back and reading them from the beginning up to where they leave off and I never tire of them. The time you take to go over every detail is impeccable and your research of historical events and society of Asian culture is refreshing and breathes extra life into the stories. I applaude you for taking the time out of your schedule to write and share for others to enjoy. I eagerly look forward to reading the upcoming chapters!
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  • From ANON - Erica on June 14, 2009
    YEAY!!! He finally said it!!!! This is my favorite story of yours! Your an amazing writer. Update this one soon please!!
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  • From eoNbluesaturNalia on June 14, 2009
    ahhh! that was great! i love the mushy bits as much as the smut. it adds so much. the simple 'everyday' things they share, but the declaration was great. oh boy, i can't wait for more. i have a feeling you're going to make me cry in one of these chapters ;)
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  • From ANON - cookie on June 14, 2009
    i love how they just layed there all night.
    keep it up!

    save some steamy scenes for the future as well :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 12, 2009
    A bit short, but with the awesome ending, i can't complain. HE FINALLY SAID IT! YEAH!
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