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Reviews for In Bai Shan

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  • From ANON - tophfan101 on October 28, 2006
    Awesome writting as always! I can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - bait you in on October 27, 2006
    Amazing, this kind of writing is of professional caliber. You have a lot of talent you know.
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  • From ANON - tip on October 27, 2006
    nice can't wait to see what happens next time.
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  • From ANON - rattle on October 22, 2006
    Nice, very nice.
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  • From ANON - Skillz on October 22, 2006
    Very nice. A little creepy, but very nice. Also, I notice they had an orgasm pretty fast. Not complaining, but it seemed fast.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 17, 2006
    This is really well written, to the point where I'm actually interested in the story and not the smut. Oh and props to you for making their sex realistic, as opposed to being horny bunnies/sexgods in one go.
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  • From ANON - Roxy on October 16, 2006
    Nice! Can't wait fot the next chapter looks like its going to be a good one...
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  • From Spleef on October 15, 2006
    Jun masturbating... mm, that was hot.
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  • From ANON - wein on October 12, 2006
    You are defiantly one of my favorite authors now.
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  • From ANON - Toph_Fanboy on October 12, 2006
    Yes!!! Another Toph story. Very good so far, hope you keep up the great writing.
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  • From ANON - ama on October 10, 2006
    wow, now thats what I call a sequel.
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  • From ANON - TheDarkOne on October 10, 2006
    Enjoying the story just like the other one. I just wish you'd give Irun *Iroh and Jun* a chance ^_^ Please? For a fan? ;)
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  • From ANON - SyJen on October 09, 2006
    I like it, please bring on the next chapter
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  • From ANON - Marik on October 09, 2006
    Great Story! Can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - gilmaxter on October 09, 2006
    keep going i like the story line, it seems pretty good, your work didn't suffer at all.
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