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Reviews for In Bai Shan

By : Gunwild
  • From ANON - Blackash Kitsune on December 05, 2006
    Good story so far. Keep up the good work, and keep the story coming.

    Your fan in the shadows,

    Blackash Kitsune
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  • From ANON - bait and you in on December 04, 2006
    Yeah, your back and better than ever.
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  • From ANON - rolair on December 04, 2006
    Great work haven't seen one tokka fic as good as yours anywere. Oh I know this is gonna sound really stupid but are you male or female you can normaly tell with authors on this site because they obviouly know one body better or are more biased to describing sex in one way or another. You seem to know both bodies very well but I think you are a male because of the Azula team threesome fic but im not 100% sure. Adding on to this long pointless review thanks for putting plot into your story and not pure smut it makes it much more enjoyable. Hope you update your story soon i'll be waiting for the next update but of course no pressure.
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  • From ANON - D4rK on December 04, 2006
    Yes!!! ill been waiting for this for weeks, but i think that maybe toph and sokka cant have action in there now, waiting for next update pls soon, see ya
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  • From ANON - corncurlz on December 03, 2006
    Can't wait for the nxt chapter.
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  • From ANON - 0.o on November 26, 2006
    Wow, this is great. I've always been a Tokka fan, but your next chapter interests me much more. You're a great writer and Kataang is my favorite pairing, but all Kataang smut is usually crap. I cant wait to read yours, you've written everything else so well. So update already.

    PS, in 'Feel It', that part about Katara masturbating... yeah. Uber-hotness.

    PPS, 'Bai Shan' is an actual city, but I'm sure you knew that already, right? ;)
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  • From ANON - D4rK on November 24, 2006
    Nice fic there isnt no enought tokka around here, but u my friend r doing a great fucking job, pls update soon i want to u know what could happen in here 'til next update see ya
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  • From ANON - Ana on November 23, 2006
    Great story so far!

    Just update already!!!!
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  • From ANON - Shard on November 22, 2006
    Awesome story, I just love it and can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - Al on November 17, 2006
    How can you not have updated something this good yet!
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  • From ANON - Juxtaposie on November 14, 2006
    Dear lord, how excited was I to find that you'd written another fic? And it's Tokka too! Your talent never ceases to amaze me. I cannot WAIT for the second chapter!
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  • From ANON - chu chu on November 10, 2006
    This is now my favroite story on this site seriously. I wish it would go on forever.
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  • From ANON - chiller7 on November 09, 2006
    Words cant express just how much I love your work.
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  • From ANON - jett on November 07, 2006
    I really like this fic! Toph and Sokka just go so well together for some reason (Or I'm just a strange pervert.) You really ought to continue and soon. I'm dying of anticipation!!
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  • From ANON - TheDarkOne on October 28, 2006
    I just read your fic again and I must say you have captured each character how they should be. I'm trying to get pointers on Jun ^_^ *I'm so happy she's in your story* I'm helplessly addicted to your work and I hope you write more soon
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