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Reviews for Blue Mask

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  • From ANON - Kitsune on May 26, 2007
    pretty good
    grammer needs to be worked on but not bad
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  • From YoukaiFate on March 23, 2007
    That was---satisfying. Completely satisfying. I loved the ending, although I was bitter over Zuko's death, but it was noble and right. Perfect compliment to the whole tale. Wrapped up neatly, with a sweet touch at the end. Thank you for writing and sharing it.

    Fate
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  • From YoukaiFate on March 22, 2007
    The end of days---shit, I'm crying and can't stop. This sucks, but its still so great. Azula, Katara, damn. The emo is so overwhelming. Damn your genius.

    Fate
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  • From YoukaiFate on March 22, 2007
    This story is...wow. It's the best I've seen in over three years of reading fanfiction. You are a phenomenal writer, very detail-oriented, and what history and imagination! You have a fluidity that continues to surprise and amaze me, as I go from one emotion to the other, one mental picture to the complete opposite. The depth of feeling in certain poignant scenes leaves me completely in awe. I sobbed---sobbed!---over Zuko's childhood memories of his father's whip, and the darkness of it---making him kiss it, and then say "This scum does not deserve..."---holy fart, that chilled me to the inner depths of my soul. Frightening---and all too believable, because you created that impact. Damn.

    And then to go on to Sokka's anger, the various details that made his "Skull Splitter/s" take shape in my mind's eye, wow. (Sheesh, am I eloquent, or what?!) I'm just amazed how you can move from one to the other, and I can feel painful empathy for Zuko as a child, and then angry sympathy for Sokka's own inner seething. I am not making any sense right now---I'm up way past my bedtime, LOL, and am barely keeping my eyes open. I can't believe I'm clicking off at such a cliffhanger---Katara about to enter the dreamworld to (gods, I hope!) save Zuko.

    I can't say enough how much I am enjoying and adoring this story. The implementation of the Blue Mask and Zuko's skills as an assassin/magician, how the simple idea of a pampered princeling having access to the best teachers, and how you play off of his stubborn nature. (Totally agree there! it's his will that drives him, nothing else.) Introduction of the "chaos child" and how even the gods are against them (Zuko/Katara)---wow. Just, wow.

    I hope you are writing your own fiction, and I would love to see you in print. You have true talent.

    Fate

    PS - I must add in that my favorite chapter/scene was "Madam Chi's Walls." Adored the interplay on words between Iroh's seige on the walls of Ba Sing Se (sp?) and his victory of Madam Chi, who seems quite a bit tougher. =)
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  • From 29nightfall on February 05, 2007
    I truely enjoyed reading this great fic, but what I really ehjoyed is that you give the characters personialty.
    That alone just seem to bring them to life.
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  • From ANON - William M. Woods on December 10, 2006
    DUDE!! That was fuckin amazing i have been trying to write a Zuko/Azula fic for wuite some time. But the way you portrayed the characters and their suffering at the hands of Ozai was amazing ("I forgive you for everything" greatest line ever) my god i'm still geekin out about it. Ending was spectacular, thankyou.
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  • From ANON - jett on November 26, 2006
    this fic of yours is gr8!! you're a helluva writer & should keep up the good work!!
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  • From ANON - Double-Edged on November 24, 2006
    Haven't finished your story yet. Though I do like it so far. Interesting plot. Weird Prophecies have been done before but the never fail to add to the intrigue...

    And now the part where I point out the flaws in your dialogue... Which is both my favorite and most hated thing I do in reviews... While I do like your story thus far and intend to read much more of it before the day is out I have to point out the following things...

    1. It's the Battle of Ba Sing Se... not Ba Sing Sing...
    2. The little blind Earthbender... you know the one doing Aang... Her name is TOPH not TROPH... slight difference.

    At first I thought there were more, but... Can't remember them. I guess if there are more then they aren't that big...
    I know I sound like an ass, and if you called me one to my face I wouldn't be surprised. I also suppose I sound like a stupid ass for making a big deal about something that...retarded...

    Can't help it I'm afraid. My brain has an annoying tendency to get hung up on tiny incongruencies...
    Well...bye!
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  • From ANON - flea_bag on November 16, 2006
    You are a fucking genious. I cried. I did. Thank you, for this wonderful piece of work that was so full of the gritty reality of life and the emotions of human beings-- and not cartoon characters. I will probably marry you.
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  • From ANON - ZC on November 15, 2006
    This very very good.
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  • From ANON - ikey on November 08, 2006
    Amazing. I started reading this at 5:30 this evening and have just now finished (11:53). I couldn't stop... It was like a disease, albiet a good one! Zuko... GAH. And I loved your take on Azula. Who knows? She might just want to be loved (but I doubt it). The way you wrote all of these characters was so emotionally inspiring that I could feel for every one of them. Wonderful fic. It's one of the best I've ever read. I will definetly check up on your other fics. Keep writing!
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  • From ANON - revanninja on November 03, 2006
    Nice story well written a little thin on the porn but this story is shaped to be action and it does it well. Lovee the idea of Zuko getting 4 women pregnant though shuddered in horror on the Azula bit. Liked how you threw in chinese words in with their translation right by instead of at the bottom makes the story easier.My one complaint is the Lung problem One If Zuko had bad lungs like that it wouldn't kil him or speed up his dettriation but rather make Breathing control A LOT harder but it can't affect the lungs like that only something in our lungs could do that like a peice of bone or hard muccus. Two the more logical thing for your description of his lungs is trubucolis I belive is how its spelled anyhow It fills the lungs with Muccus which when blood starts to appear is because the Muccus has harden and is stabbing the lungs slowly ripping them apart with each breath that would fit in a lot better. three if you have lung problems as a kid but they go away they can't come back years later its just not possible espically if its a physical formantion problem I know because my strenum is dented inwards and use to give me problems breathing but now it doesn't and can't harm me. four Physical act such as Firebending and Swordplay would help Zuko's health since all the motion helps break up muccus and prevent it from getting to big to cause damage. Beyond the Health problem and a lack of Sokka/Suki since you did pair them at the end its a very good story. Also I am aware my spelling sucks.
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  • From Silverwolf1633 on October 24, 2006
    Loving the sequel-ness. So.... is Li Ling going to be the reincarnate of Zuko or is this the end for quite a marvelous story? How did Lady Azula become Seer though...side affect of blindness? And props to all of the little airbenders! A truly good story, proper mix of violence, action, plot, ect. truly well done, waiting for more.......
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  • From ANON - Scarylady on October 24, 2006
    :D Is this going to continue? Or has it been completed. It's nice to see this incarnation of those characters find a (relatively) peaceful end. :) Excellent work!
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  • From ANON - wudelfin on October 23, 2006
    The whole series what just fantastic!!! Your story was woven so well. Just lovely
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