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Reviews for Fortieth Birthday Surprise

By : Bonniefan
  • From bigherb81 on January 18, 2009
    Nice one gotta say I was kinda thinking it would be funny if Ron did find out and very classic teenage boy reaction I must say. Great work on this one glad I finally got to read it.
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  • From Jarkota on April 28, 2007
    Niiiiiiice. Now that the bug with my account that's kept me from reviewing seems to be fixed, I can return the favor.

    I absolutely adored this fic. You see so fiew involving Kim's parents that *don't* have Anne sleeping with Ron or James having an affair with Monique that it's worth a read just to see soemthign decent. Well, this is beyond decent. I would go sof ar as to say that this is one of the better fics on the site, and one last addition (like a final 'farewell' between Vivian and Anne and James) would do nicely to wrap it all up. Keep up the good work, man.
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  • From ANON - felipe fontecilla on January 01, 2007
    WOW
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  • From ANON - frank on November 22, 2006
    wow
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  • From ANON - RonMan on November 12, 2006
    And here I thought Daddy P was going to get a Kimmie ride. Guess she's saving it for me :)
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  • From mattb3671 on November 11, 2006
    All hail the Canadian Smufflord! HUZZAH! Nice job, you smuffy buggar! Hot, like fire! ;)

    THANKS!
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  • From ANON - ronnie on November 10, 2006
    FUNNY AS HELL!!!No kid would like too see that.
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  • From ANON - RI100014 on November 06, 2006
    Even after your attempt on my life (Plot Bunny 12-gauge, pump-action shotgun remember?:P) I still will leave you a review. I have to say that was great. I love it that James and Mrs. Possible have such trust in their marriage that something like this only strengths their relationship instead of hurting it.
    Oh and having Ron catch on to what was happening before Kim was hilarious, especially his rather (IMO) randy smile that broke out across his face. "MrDrP you are the man!" LOL LOL. Poor Kimmie. She'll never look at her parents the same way again...hehehe.

    Till next time...adios.
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  • From ANON - Big Mike on November 06, 2006
    Wow! Just... wow... That was... very descriptive. I liked the ending with Kim and Ron coming into the house. That was so Ron to say "Way to go!" Now Kimmie's going to have to use some brain soap! My question is... Why did Ron want to stay?
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  • From ANON - spectre666 on November 05, 2006
    Hilarious. Also quite arousing in it's way. However, you must do an epilogue about Kimmie..
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  • From ANON - SM on November 05, 2006
    That was a really nice ending.
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  • From ANON - Ivana C. on September 16, 2006
    wow. just....wow. so hot! wow.
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  • From ANON - Big Mike on September 13, 2006
    Holy Frijoles! I always wanted to read something with Vivian... and this is good! Most definitely enjoying this. Can't wait for the next chap...
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  • From ANON - SM on September 10, 2006
    That was nice. I always liked Kim's parents. They seemed like such a great and lively couple; kind like what Ron and Kim would be like when older.
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