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Reviews for The Dark Ocean

By : Rann
  • From LibraForsaken on April 05, 2007
    ^^; I'll just take this to the point and say I'm in love with "The Dark Ocean". Seriously. I loved the emotion, the turmoil, the understanding of one's self. And the jaguar. X3 I hope you update soon.
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  • From SuperMutant on April 04, 2007
    I have to admit, I kind of saw that ending coming. I like how you subtley incorporated the story title into this chapter.
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  • From RWO on April 03, 2007
    very good story, read the rest of ten today. Just one question...
    SHEGO'S NOT REALLY DEAD RIGHT!? *a hopefull and worried look*
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  • From daquine on March 30, 2007
    dis fic was awesome write more
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  • From necromage on March 29, 2007
    good story hope shego pulls tru
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  • From jackaniny on March 28, 2007
    Dude! That was so not fair! Another super cliffhanger was not what my health needed.
    And Shego had better be O.K. somehow or I might just have to pay you a visit. (cracks knuckles)

    Seriously though, best story on AFF. Period.
    The first thing I do when I go on AFF is see if a new chapter is up. I could go on reading this story for years.

    Keep up the good work!

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  • From wildkit on March 28, 2007
    MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 25, 2007
    Rann, I seriously love this story and what you've been doing with it. But you're cliffhanger is just plain *evil*!!! :D
    Keep up the great writing and I can't wait to see what you have planned next! >:-)
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  • From SuperMutant on March 20, 2007
    I thought this was a really unique, (and epic) chapter. The dynamic of the characters was one I don't think I've actually seen elsewhere, and the developments pose an interesting question in regards to Kim and Shego. Shego has developed with the other characters totally absent Kim's influence or knowledge, and I imagine that will make for a strange sort of alienation for Kim. I also think it was wise of you to separate the two main characters as it allows them to get more depth and keeps to a 'less is more' philosophy. There were some very surprising and memorable moments, and daring amount of intimacy considering Kim was absent from this chapter. I think it's a little shame that, (I don't think) you cant see this epic feeling story on a more high traffic site like FF.net
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  • From jackaniny on February 23, 2007
    DAMM! chapter six was good. can't wait for the next one!
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  • From jackaniny on February 21, 2007
    Oh man! I can't wait to read the next one. One of my favorite fics ever!
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  • From XxKrazi3xLov3xX on February 19, 2007
    Wow! the fight scene was intense! Cant wait for the next update, i hope pretty soon ^^;
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  • From SuperMutant on February 17, 2007
    An unpredictable turn of events, to be sure. In the last chapter I was wondering about whether Kim's turn at supervillainy would begin compromise her morality, but the arrival of GJ's goons, (I think it's more appropriate that liberal use of force be made by criminal adjuncts of the authorities rather than the law-and-order peopel themselves)threw a wrench in that. At first I was a little worried about the plot line itself, for while you had a great grasp of style, prose, et al, I thought it was a little contrived. But the last two chapters have a seen greater empahsis on interpersonal relationships aside from the main actors, and a more complicated conflict. Really quite good, and exciting.
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  • From XxKrazi3xLov3xX on January 31, 2007
    WoW!!! O.O;; this is such an awesome KiGo fic! I hope u update soon ^^*;
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 12, 2007
    Wonderful way to include Oracle/Batgirl while not violating any additional copyrights. Also will we be seeing Zarpox or the Killer Bebes? Or perhaps the dreaded shapeshifter herself?

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