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Reviews for Thug Luvin'

By : gabriel769
  • From ANON - Lil Shawdy on September 17, 2006
    plz u hav ta update dis story is gettin good!
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  • From NarutoPhantom on September 10, 2006
    I just love this, I can't wait to see if Riley got Sara knocked up, please say that will happen to her. Also I would love to see if you could turn Sara from a nice young woman into a nasty sluty bitch that she was ment to be for Riley, also do you think she would work with Riley when he's out with Ed and Gin robbing a Bank, because she would be a real bad girl then.
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  • From ANON - S.M. on September 09, 2006
    I love your story so far, please do your best to add chapter 4 ASAP. The only chritizism I can think of is that you might want to add more Sara/Riley sex parts
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  • From ANON - Darkstar on September 07, 2006
    I thought this story was excellent, I agree with the first reviewer about Riley being a bit OOC in chapter one though, but you made up for it in chapter two with him singing back that ass up. I think this story has great potential, and I hope many more people review it, I also hope you continue it, the thought of Sara having sex with anyone besides that "fucking pansy" Tom, is plenty enough reason to read this fic, but don't take that last remark too far and have her having sex with anybody but Riley, they look cute together. Hope to see an update soon.
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  • From ANON - Sabrina W. on September 05, 2006
    It's an Ok PWP. I would like to see there relationship develop more. I would like to see Riley use Jazmine to make Sara and Huey jealous and cause a huge ass stir up. ^^ Keep going.
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  • From ANON - killjoevolume1 on September 01, 2006
    Well that was pretty awesome, at last u posted a boondocks fic. I ust wishd that it was a little bit deeper w/ emotional development an plot and all that noval shit. Got a bit OOC when Riley was all like " I love you, Sara Dubois. "LOL But if you wer going for riley having a soft side than that woks too. Just don't have him talking w/ a british accent and all proper and s&%t. But if this fic is going to be purely for the perv's, like myself, than details never hurt. Neither is trying new stuff and positions. Either way, I encourage you to write on.
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