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Reviews for Feel It!

By : Gunwild
  • From AloofandAndrogynous on September 23, 2006
    You write Tokka so beautifully that I am going to go in the corner and cry.
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  • From ANON - sexypancake on September 23, 2006
    can't wait for the BIG lemon!!! great job on this chapter! i thought it was totally funny how sokka and toph covered the situatuion when aang found them. they're both so sarcastic! they're perfect for each other!
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  • From ANON - PikaBot on September 23, 2006
    Very much in character, and sort of sweet. I will admit, though, that I found the first chapter creepy on a never-before-seen level. I mean, let's face it; Boy masturbating in front of a (at least he thinks) unsuspecting blind twelve year old? CREEPY.

    But the dialogue is extremely in character, and it's sprinkled with all sorts of nice touches, like Toph talking at the moon at the end of the first chapter. I would definately put this above most of the stuff on AFF.net.
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  • From ANON - TheHurley on September 22, 2006
    ok, that was cute.


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  • From ANON - redcorn4u on September 22, 2006
    This story never stops amazing me.
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  • From ANON - AquaLancer on September 22, 2006
    Another great chapter ,Loving your take on the world of avatar. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - HURRY UP on September 21, 2006
    I wanna hear the next part. You said one every 5, and It's been, what, 15?
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  • From ANON - LOL on September 21, 2006
    Wow! There's something about hot juice from a Vagina.... :P
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  • From ANON - takeonme on September 20, 2006
    Now this is how you write a story, take a bow champ.
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  • From ANON - Sean on September 20, 2006
    Nice work on your story so far, please do your best to add more chapters ASAP
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  • From ANON - sexypancake on September 19, 2006
    this is sooooo gerat! so hot! ever since watching the secret of the fire nation, i've been totally wanting to see this pairing! great job! can't wait for chapter four.
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  • From ANON - Imhotep on September 18, 2006
    I like how Sokka takes love over Hotness. Something that needs to happen more in our world... :P
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 17, 2006
    Sorry, I mean't that compaired to most of the stories on this site this was good!
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 17, 2006
    compaired I most of the stories on this site this was great
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  • From ANON - JoJo on September 17, 2006
    You know, it's nice to find a decent adult-oriented fanfic that isn't JUST about sex. I mean, that's pretty much what this is, but the approach is a lot deeper than you normally find, and you have a wonderful grasp on the characters. I can't wait to see how this all turns out!
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