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Reviews for Neutral Ground

By : arterybreak
  • From Darkchi13 on April 28, 2013
    This was absolutely amazing and I loved it to no end. You did a fantastic job with it and I hope you continue to write more for them. I can not stress how much I loved this story haha.
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  • From sissy43130 on September 14, 2008
    If these three chapters are the only ones, I will feel very angry. You should add some more chapters or something. There needs to be more drama, more action, more sex! LOL!
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  • From ANON - righthand on January 10, 2007
    you know what would be funny and creepy at the same time? if chase had seen jack doing clay using one of his crowspying thingys. now that would be fuked up! is jack even allowed to sleep with clay during this missoin?
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  • From ANON - foxy on January 10, 2007
    we dont know the consequences either but we sure as fuck woiuld like to find out.
    come on jack dont mess this up. but he probab;ly will. jsut watch, hell be back with chase before he realises he fucked up. stupid boy. but we love him!
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  • From ANON - 2U on January 09, 2007
    wait a minute...was jack supposed to sleep with clay?for his missoin? or was he just suposd to get freindly and maybe a lil touchy with him?
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  • From ANON - Night Eyes on December 03, 2006
    i LOOOOOOVE it please write more please please with sugar on top
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  • From ANON - Kitten on November 17, 2006
    Why won't you update? Is it me? It's me...It's me isn't it?
    ...*sniff*...WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAh!!!!!! YOU HATE ME!!!!!! Please update before I fall into spiraling depression!!!!
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  • From ANON - Kitten on November 03, 2006
    WHY WON'T YOU UPDAT!?!?! It's me, It's me. It's me isn't it? well I guess I'll just sit in a state of depression until you update, which will be greeted with many happy faces-----> ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ like that!
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  • From ANON - catc10 on October 27, 2006
    Oh my god chapter three is the hottest thing EVAR!!!
    I don't know what to say, my mind has been blown into ittsy bittsy little peices of incoherent thought.
    I LOVE YOU FOR WRITING THIS!!!
    ME
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  • From ANON - Kitten on October 17, 2006
    Yet again I will love u lots if u continue this story....yeah...plz finish
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  • From ANON - Evol on October 10, 2006
    ooooh....jakies in trouble! heehee....more plz!
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  • From ANON - roundarosie on October 09, 2006
    I am pleased.

    Wonderful work on this chapter. "Yummy"


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  • From ANON - Kitten on October 09, 2006
    If I loved you and this story before....it's nothing compared to how I feel about it now! This is definatley the best Xaoilin Showdown story ever!!!!! Your the best writer in all the universe!!!! Your lemons are awesome as well as your story lol Update and I will give you yet another review filled with love!!!
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  • From ANON - senachan141 on October 07, 2006
    Fwee!! I love it!! I just can't wait for the next chappie to be up!! X3
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  • From ANON - ShadowofLight on October 07, 2006
    Can I say jsut how great your fanfic is? For one thing, the pairing I admit I had my doubts but the way you portrayed it was so good! Second, I love how you captured Clay's personality so well!! Even the accent I can jsut picture him talking! You're amazing. Third, I really like the plot. I feel so bad for Jack and I hope to see something GOOD happen to him. I hope to see an update soon. Again I love your fic, I wanna read it again! Thanks for sharing :)
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