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Reviews for Bitter Alliance

By : Looneyluna
  • From ANON - poornmiserable on February 05, 2007
    well im happy u updated finally and i hope this writing trend continues i very much enjoy your stories and i hope you update very soon keep up the good work
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  • From Spleef on February 04, 2007
    You know I am loving this story... and you may want to enable Anon reviews. This story really deserves more reviews!
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  • From ANON - Scorpinac on February 04, 2007
    And about darn time, too! Of, course, the real problem is getting rid of Ozai's soul before he corrupts Kaya! But I'll settle for Katara healing Zuko first, though I think those two brothers are gonna get a tongues lashing from Mahari and their father when they hear about this! Well, try to continue soon! Laters!
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  • From taoistelf on February 03, 2007
    Wow... you have a lot on your plate.. HOW DO YOU DO IT?

    Well mine is not to wonder, only to enjoy the fruits of your labour! Lucky me!! Another awesome chapter. I can't wait till they get back together (in either story). There is very little... (okay... almost none) intelligent, sophisticated Zutara. And you are such an awesome, astute and complex writer. I am adicted.

    THANKS!

    If you need any inspiration, hit me up grrl!
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  • From ANON - Ravin J Rijhsinghani on December 22, 2006
    hey, luv da story, keep it coming! omg, the rape scene is unkewl do not lyk it it is unkewl making love-kewl raping sumone-unkewl. spleef's email is sumthin lyk regina_noctem@yahoo.com.
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  • From ANON - Angel on December 19, 2006
    I have one word.....Brilliant. and one request......LEt me know when your updating =}
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  • From Spleef on December 17, 2006
    Hot damn. This chapter was thrilling.
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  • From ANON - QJD on December 16, 2006
    YES! FINALLY AANG DIES!!!!!!!!!!!! FINALL BAD GUYS PREVAIL! YAHOO!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - k15 on December 15, 2006
    cool.
    Zuko: Wow, I love the way you've developed my character.
    Me: Yeah exactly.Anyway, keep up the great work. Later. K15
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  • From ANON - poornmiserable on December 15, 2006
    good job on this chapter....the whole amnesia thing even though its been done it actually works for you fic....i hope you update soon keep up the good work :)
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  • From ANON - Scorpinac on December 15, 2006
    And as to Mai and Ty Lee, they could always pop up among either Zuko's followers or in the desert with Katara - the latter scenario being they opted to put as much distance between them and Ozai as possible after Azula went down, and have been traveling here, there, and everywhere since, and have now wound up here. Ain't karma a bitch? Laters.
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  • From ANON - Scorpinac on December 15, 2006
    Does makea certain amount of sense, though. I'm guessing that in the future a certain vial of sacred spring water is going to some into play? Can't wait for the next one! Laters.
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  • From ANON - chris on December 15, 2006
    Awesome girl! Very nice chapter... and tastefully not too graphic. While I find the power of confidence, desire, intensity and the play of subtle respectful domination sexy ... I have the same feelings as you of course about rape. But fit well into the story.

    Poor Zuko! I hope Katara finds him and helps heal him emotionally.

    Such a well-written story, girl! Don't give up on the price of peace though! If you ever want to bounce ideas off of anyone, you have my email! Please sign me up for the update notices!

    Update soon! I so much enjoy this story...


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  • From ANON - Scarylady on December 15, 2006
    O_O Whaoh. Poor Zuko. Ouch, man. I hope he gets better soon...
    Amnesia...used correctly it can be good,used badly...>_
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  • From ANON - Emily on December 14, 2006
    I really am a bit confused and worried, but I hope it'll all work out!
    = S
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