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Reviews for Bitter Alliance

By : Looneyluna
  • From ANON - Scorpinac on March 18, 2007
    Yes, I imagine most of their reunion scenes in the next chapter will consist of Katara using her bending powers to heal him back up towards his previous un-scarred state, possibly helping to restore some of his lost memories in the process. And the delicious lemon reunion moment will be in the chapter after the next one. Well, don't take to long, unless you have too. Laters.
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  • From ANON - poornmiserable on March 17, 2007
    that was so awesome i was on the edge of my seat.....you are right it's to soon for the reUNION scene.....this was a really good chapter cant wait to see what happens next update soon...i love this story
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  • From ANON - Scarylady on March 17, 2007
    Awww, that was sweet. Hopefully Zuko will get more time with Katara. She'll make him better :) Though I wonder what's on that flag...the emblem of that crazy cult? o_0 Hopefully we'll find that out soon...
    Gooooooood chapter!
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  • From ANON - chris on March 17, 2007
    Beautifully done (as always). You know my fave thing about your writing... is your emotional nuance. It is so well developed and expressed!! Very nice. Very powerful. I have tears in my eyes.

    You were right... this is the perfect scene. NEver doubt your instinct in writing!

    Many thanks and I always await the next chapter!

    ALoha!
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  • From ANON - Scarylady on March 15, 2007
    O_O Whoah. It's so refreshing to see Mahari as *not* haveing all the answers.
    Reunion chapter? :3 This will be so lovely...poor Zuko needs Katara so badly. And his babies, though he probably won't see his children for a while yet...
    Excellent! *anxiously awaites next chapter*
    And enjoy that vacation away from the kids :) Sleep is good.
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  • From ANON - poornmiserable on March 14, 2007
    i love this story ....it is your best work...its so dark.....keep up the great work please update soon
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  • From taintedeuphoria on March 14, 2007
    Wow. Seeing Zuko struggling so as not to crumble is heartbreaking. Thank you for your writing. This story truly has me absolutely captivated, and I eagerly await the next chapter.
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  • From sasynatali on March 13, 2007
    good chapter! i understand with the whole needy child issue! I have two myself! lots of luck!
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  • From greenqueen312 on March 13, 2007
    yay! you updated on my birthday!! best present ever! yet another fantastic chapter. keep it up! xD.
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  • From ANON - Scorpinac on March 13, 2007
    Finally! Now, hopefully, things can start to improve a little bit, maybe, perhaps... And I think you left out, "Mommy, when's the new Harry Potter gonna come out?" Bet that one gets on your nerves a lot, too! Hehheh, I'm a bad man... Laters!
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  • From ANON - chris on March 13, 2007
    Another thing about "darkness." it is this that draws me to Zuko in the first place. I acknowledge my inner shadow and light and it is very satisfying to read someing that explores both too. Fluffnstuff has it's place so to speak, but true psych and drama have depth. You can't dive deep without shadow. I find dark to often be a metaphor for brutally honest. You have the gift of exploring this side of humanity (read the fukkin news! *sigh*) and illuminate that beauty of self as it emerges from despair. Okay.. kinda heady for a fanfic review... but well ... accurate.
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  • From ANON - chris on March 13, 2007
    OMG! I can't WAIT until the next chapter. Yes this is dark, but in a very real way. And makes the longing for redemption and resolution all the more addictive. I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter...

    bravo
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 12, 2007
    Good Luck! Great story so far, a bit dark, but I am eager to see Katara and Zuko reunited. You have really generated a unique storyline. Thanks.
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  • From greenqueen312 on March 05, 2007
    Yay! New chapter! You continue to leave me wanting more! Can't wait 'til the next chapter!
    [ps] Thank you for the update email!

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  • From ANON - Scorpinac on March 05, 2007
    Of course it wouldn't, that's why you caught it.(hehehe, sorry...)

    This doesn't sound like it bodes well for Kaya... On the other hand, interesting use of Pathik, wasn't expecting him. Well, I look forward to the next part. laters.
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