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Reviews for Bitter Alliance

By : Looneyluna
  • From ANON - SnowFlakeAlchemist on September 25, 2007
    I abolutly love this story and cannot wait until you udate again. I will have to see what othe goodies that you have written!
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  • From Scorpinac on September 25, 2007
    Hmm, multi-year jump, huh? Okay, makes sense. Nice pick-up. the twins going into their teens is interesting. Poor Sokka, did Ozai have anything to do with this? Or the Kroni from afar to try and break their spirits? Though I suppose it makes sense, given his previous condition and all. Well, still looking forward to more. Laters!
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  • From ANON - Scarylady on September 25, 2007
    SQUEEE! Cuteness and fluff! Daddy Zuko is so amusing :3 I loved Katara's reaction to Kaya getting her hair cut *giggles* and a new baby! Zuko's happy :)
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  • From Cards on September 18, 2007
    Whoa!
    I just finished reading your story, and I absolutely love it! I usually don't like first-person narration, but you capture the characters excellently, and portray their thoughts and emotions very clearly. I really like your writing. Even though I prefer to ship Kataang, the emotion you put into Zuko and Katara's relationship here is awesome.
    Sorry to hear about all your surgeries, and I hope that you're hands and wrists will become better.

    As long as it's not going to kill your hands, and you find time, MOAR!

    ~Ghost
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  • From Spleef on September 06, 2007
    As always, excellent work. One of the better stories on this site, for sure.
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  • From ANON - Shai on August 26, 2007
    Good work. I enjoy your story very much. Thank you for writing.
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  • From ANON - Chris on August 25, 2007
    I love it as usual. I love your psych and emotions, girl. I am glad to wait! For a while I thought you had stopped writing this, so anything is appreciated!

    I also have a kid and a super busy schedule, so I know how it is!!!

    Many thanks for an awesome, sexy and sensual story. MORE PLEASE!!! This is the only story I am reading right now... really really good!
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  • From ANON - Chris on August 25, 2007
    I love it as usual. I love your psych and emotions, girl. I am glad to wait! For a while I thought you had stopped writing this, so anything is appreciated!

    I also have a kid and a super busy schedule, so I know how it is!!!

    Many thanks for an awesome, sexy and sensual story. MORE PLEASE!!! This is the only story I am reading right now... really really good!
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  • From Scorpinac on August 20, 2007
    Ah, a nice slow moment. Yeah, I think I can see where Katara was coming from in regards to scrubbing the twins clean. And finally Zuko's got all, or at least most, of his memories back, so that should help. Well, take your time on the final act, and I look forward to what's most likely left of Ba Sing Se. Laters.
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  • From Nuk on August 20, 2007
    Wow
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  • From ANON - Scarylady on August 19, 2007
    Yay! Zuko got his memories back (as well as some attention from Katara ;3)! Much love for the story! :)
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  • From CaptATKirk on August 13, 2007
    Once again My Lady you have worked your Magic. I see all your surgeries have not killed the muse in you but made her stronger....Oh and email me when you have a chance with the ubdate. =)
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  • From Scorpinac on August 13, 2007
    Did Kaya literally tear the influence out of him into herself?! Gutsy move, kiddo. Well done. Ah, yes, another satisfying chapter, and next time Ba Sing Se! It'll be interesting how you have the place set up now. Probably still rebuilding... Oh, well. Laters.
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  • From poornmiserable on August 10, 2007
    oh my goodness....your health should always come before the fiction....thank you though for updating great job on this story i love it so much so much angst...spoilers what spoilers what did you hear....it sounded to me like there might not be anymore zutara within the series oh my goodness no its the end of the world....well i hope all goes well with your operation keep up the great job :)
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  • From ANON - Scarylady on July 30, 2007
    YOU'RE BAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAACK!!!!!!!!!! SQUEEEEEEEEEEE!!!! :3 So very happy to see you update! I'm glad the surgery went well :3 Zuko finally got to see his kids! Happiness and joy! Aaaaaaand then something goes wrong. Poor man is cursed ^_^' Oh well, makes for a good story though. :D
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