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Reviews for Bitter Alliance

By : Looneyluna
  • From on April 06, 2008
    I have almost read half of this story but I have to say BRAVO!!!. This will be one of my favorites. I shall return and finish the rest today. OrangePeelings
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  • From ANON - Ky on March 31, 2008
    This chapter made me sad BUT I am HAPPY that you are back with us. Amen to your sermon and I hope you stay well and your hands get better and stay that way. Ky
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  • From ANON - poornmiserable on March 30, 2008
    another twist...how old is iroh again....is he gonna have to be killed later in the story poor boy....keep up the great work update soon
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  • From ANON - Novicegirl on March 29, 2008
    It took me sometime to read what you have until this point and I have to say Bravo. This is marvelous.Update it when you can I will be waiting. Novicegirl
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  • From Granite on March 28, 2008
    It is awesome to see that you are back and writing mavelous as always. I've always been a FAN keep writing~ Stone2fire
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  • From WildWestSamurai on March 27, 2008
    HEY! Looneyluna! You're alive!! ^_^ Just to make this known, it's me Yong Wing from AvatarSpirit.Net. I missed this story & heard it was on this site, so I got myself an account the day I turned 18.

    Anywho... awesome update with Pathik's return & the prophecy reading. Interesting turn of events with little Iroh going over to the Dark Side. *sniff* Jeong Jeong... He was kick-ass. Well, anyways, can't wait to see how this all ends & turns out. ^_^ As for your hand, hope it's doing well.
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  • From Scorpinac on March 27, 2008
    Oy.... Somehow I don't see a good end coming for Iroh's namesake. In fact, it rather sounds like he's been possessed by Ozai. And alas poor Pathik, soon to die by Knowledge Spirit wrath. Somehow, I don't think it'll be pretty... Oh, well. I eagerly await the next chapter. Laters.
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  • From ANON - Mira on March 25, 2008
    I just happened to be browsing the site when I saw Sleefmistress's name. I *adore* her writing on vanilla ff.net and when I saw what stories she recommened we read I naturally (and like a good little fangirl) clicked the corresponding links.

    Let me just say you have blown away all of my expectations. Your writing is beautiful, fluid, innovative, orignal, wonderful, and entertaining. I have been sucked into your Avatar world completely and hopelessly. Thank you for sharing your talent, for giving me something to do on the internet besides check my e-mail, webcomics, and the fansites for latest news on when the next damned episode of avatar is going to come out. God bless you woman, I hope your hands mend well throughout your various surgeries. Update whenever you can, whenever you are able, knowing I will be waiting with bated breath. You are a credit to your talent.
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  • From ANON - Kim on January 18, 2008
    So good! U are so talented. Keep it up. Hurry up and Update!!! I wanna find out what happens next.
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  • From ANON - poornmiserable on October 27, 2007
    awesome awesome awesome great job on this chapter and story in general i love this story update soon
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  • From CordeliaLeCroix on October 09, 2007
    I just started reading this story a few days ago.
    I'm not a big fanfiction reader but your plot is even better than the smut. Well done!

    This is very dark. I'm not sure how you could even breathe during the first few chapters, but I guess that was a long time ago.
    Keep up the good work!
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  • From Scorpinac on October 04, 2007
    Hmm, a story, huh? I wonder what Pathik has to tell them that's so important. Well, I look forward to the answers in the next chapter. Laters.
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  • From ANON - Dark_Rose_of_Chaos on September 30, 2007
    lol, silly little nosey spirits. I hope that you update this story soon, I just got into it and I think that you are amazing! Untill next time, farewell!
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  • From Spleef on September 30, 2007
    This chapter was just... wow. I can only imagine what else you have planned for this story!
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  • From Quillwing717 on September 26, 2007
    I've never reviewed before (and in fact, it's rare that I ever review at all), but I've been reading and immensely enjoying your stories in the Avatar fandom for quite some time now. You have a rare talent for writing believable, in-character Zutara stories. Both Bitter Alliance and Price of Peace are throughly engrossing, and I always make sure I have a snack and a drink before I sit down to enjoy an update.

    Bitter Alliance especially is unique and intriguing while managing to stay in character -- For Zuko in particular, which impresses me because he (more than any of the other Avatar gang) tends to fall out of character in these type of stories. Usually Zuko is too angsty, or too noble, or too powerful, and Katara is too submissive or too bitchy. I am beyond pleased that you have managed to find the right balance between their flaws. They fit so well together in your stories. Also, Bitter Alliance manages to pull of something that I have yet to master -- the convincing, engrossing first person narrator.

    Your grammar is excellent (also rare in fanfiction) and you have a particular gift for putting interesting situations in the setting of the Avatar-verse. I actually can't think of anything off the top of my head (save for the occasional typo) that really seems like it need work. ^^I so enjoy your stories that I even recommend them to my friends.

    I just wanted to say thank you, to show my appreciation in some way, for writing and sharing these wonderful stories.
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