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Reviews for Bitter Alliance

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  • From ANON - Scorpinac on September 18, 2006
    Neat. Now if only they can havea reunion so Zuko can meet his kids! Well, I leave it to you. Laters!
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  • From ANON - Scarylady on September 16, 2006
    O_O Oh. My. Goodness. THIS STORY IS AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!! It's...so deliciously plot twisty. :) :) :) :) I'm kinda at a loss for words...it's so wonderful :D I can't wait to find out what happens next :)
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  • From ANON - Anna on September 14, 2006
    They live ^^
    Yeaaaaaaaaaaaaah
    *doing a little dance*
    CHA CHA CHAAAAA!!!!!!
    nOw..... Ozai has too diiiiiiiiiiiiiiiieeeeeee....
    die Ozai die!!!!
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  • From ANON - Scorpinac on September 14, 2006
    Okay, then, new Avatar's a girl, huh? But is there any hope of besting Ozai? That is the question! Can't wait for the next one! Laters.
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  • From ANON - Anna on September 10, 2006
    oHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
    twiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiins^^
    my god i hope everything is allright...
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  • From ANON - Scorpinac on September 10, 2006
    Okay, didn't see that coming! While I'll be pretty pissed if Katara is dead, I can understand it, all things considered. Now I'm really looking forward to the next chapter! Kudos! Laters.
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  • From ANON - Scorpinac on September 05, 2006
    Good for you! Now, I ,ay well be the first to say this, or just the next in line, but I cort of thought you'd have Act II in it's own seperate fic on the Avatar page here. But whatever works for you. I await the next chapter and the revelation of Katara and Zuko's baby's gender. Laters.
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  • From ANON - Anna on September 04, 2006
    uuuuuuuuuuuh
    Zuko Katara baby!!!!!
    bAAAAD OZAI!!!!!!
    .. ok more please!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Scorpinac on August 30, 2006
    Intriguing. I eagerly await the beginning of act two. Good luck with the Hurricane! (And then the problem was taken out of their hands when the Wraith returned and culled the Fire Nation before moving on to the remants of the Earth Kingdoms and Water Tribes, one Wraith doing everyone the big favor of feeding on Ozai until he was drained dry! Hahahaha! Oh, wait, wrong series...) Laters.
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  • From Spleef on August 29, 2006
    Another excellent chapter per usual. I am so stoked to see what happens next.
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  • From ANON - nkuzmik on August 29, 2006
    Chapter 12 seems a little out of left field. Is it some kind of flashback?
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  • From ANON - Scorpinac on August 28, 2006
    I think I sense a rescue involving someone named Toph(possibly Haru or Bumy, or all of the above!) coming... Hehhehheh. ;) Laters.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 22, 2006
    Um, but if it's only been a few days since her last period, which is what it currently feels like, then they got a good four to four and half weeks before whether or not she bleeds again becomes a problem - last I checked, and I have a younger sister to back this data up, girls only menstruate for five to seven days in a twentyeight to thirty day cycle. Just saying.
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  • From Spleef on August 18, 2006
    (hugs the couple) poor them! Keep up the good work!
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  • From Silverwolf1633 on August 18, 2006
    Hmm....rather dark but I like it! Does the old lady eventally learn to airbend or will another pop up to "keep balence"? And as an idea of randomness, what prevents Toph from getting the fire lord lured outside and being sucked to the center of the earth?....Nah your story is great as is, please update soon!
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