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Reviews for Bitter Alliance

By : Looneyluna
  • From StarrCrystal on July 27, 2013
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE START WRITING MORE! I'm dying without it!
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  • From ANON - Sarah on January 02, 2013
    This is an amazing and beautiful story. And that is to say the least. I stayed up all night reading this because the story flows and captures the reader to the point where they can't stop reading. I dearly hope that you decided to continue this story. It is one of my favorite I have ever read.
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  • From ANON - henandchicks on November 01, 2011
    The scene whenZuko meets Kaya is so beautifully developed. Wonderful!
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  • From ANON - Weatherwax on July 08, 2010
    I am so excited to read your next chapter!! Please post soon!!
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  • From ANON - Me...who else on June 27, 2010
    This is great!!! Fantastically written!! But I have a question, how old are Iroh and Kaya at the end of the last chapter???
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  • From ANON - Alex on August 08, 2009
    WOAH WOAH WOAH WOAH WOAH! Hold up..... To me it sounded like Iroh has Ozai's spirit.... THAT SUCKS!!!! Good story by the way...if only you would update :'( It's been what? 5 months? :'( Come on lady pppppppppplllllllllllllllzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz!!! Believe it or not people still read your story (I started reading this a month ago :D ) plz update I WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!!!!!!!!!! WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!
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  • From scarletwitchextreme on May 14, 2009
    forgive me i dont even know if u are still here on this site by I just come across your fics and I reviewed "prisoner of war" but as i started to read bitter alliance I read the first and second chapters and half way through the second I burst into tears, I already got the terror and fear and lonliness and broken pieces that these two people are and poor sokka, i was a bumbling mess. This is fucking brilliant I have read alot of fics for a very long time and very few ppl have gotten such a emotion crash out of me as u did, and its only 2 chapters I brace myself for the rest and implore you and beg you to continue these wonderful fics you have left behind. my email is scarlet_witch_extreme@hotmail.com.

    Respect
    Scarlet
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  • From ANON - Raven on December 03, 2008
    And this is another wonderful story! I do hope you finish this one as well as Price of Peace. They are both really excellent. Thank you for sharing what you have so far, and I hope you will return to complete these.... :)
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  • From ANON - FadeAwayBlond on September 12, 2008
    Please update I miss this story
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  • From ANON - Stratas Stargazer on September 11, 2008
    I love this story! I hope your next installment comes soon!
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  • From ANON - Puppet Pui on August 07, 2008
    The end nearly made me cry. The only thing that stopped me was thinking I was gonna be able to read another chapter of the story. I guess that'll have to wait, right? :D

    Oh my God! I am so enthralled with this story! Love the plot and how you put the perspectives on it. It's a love story and you're by far a magnificent story teller, love.

    Can't wait until the next chapter comes in. I'll be on pins and needles until then. :D

    Ciao.
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  • From ANON - Mira on July 08, 2008
    Hi! I found your story on Spleef's Recommended readings, and I love your story! It always keeps me hanging! Please do continue soon.

    Thank you for the sermon. I'm a fanfic writer myself (sadly I can't write nice adult fiction because I don't know how to describe them haha) and a gamer, and spend too much time on the PC. I read about your surgery and it inspires me not to write more, but make sure that my hands can still write for those who love reading as well.

    God Speed!
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  • From zutoph on April 26, 2008
    I love this story, please continue. :)
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  • From aliponie on April 24, 2008
    Ah Crud!! No no no no NO! That cant be all!
    -flips computer over to search for more chapters-
    DAMN. I really hope you can update soon!!
    I. am. practically. BEGGING. you!
    lol. Great story, by the way.
    Cheerio,
    Chip~
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  • From Mackrel on April 09, 2008
    Will this be a happy ending I cannot see it but I LOVE THAT YOU ARE BACK!!!! BEautifully done! DOT
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