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Reviews for Ron's Surprise

By : bloodrain01
  • From ANON - archfiend on December 10, 2006
    Well, all in all a thorouglywel written story, with a few open endings (Bonnie, Yuri, new body...) giving you the opportuity to continue the story with at least another 2 or 3 chapters. There is one big minuspoint thugh, and that is the spelling.It`s so bad in some parts of the story one can hardly follow the story because the letters don`t make any sense. So please find an editor or correct the mistakes yourself, because at the moment large parts are not readable, givinh it a score of perhaps 4.5 out of ten, but if corrected and rewritten in some minor places has the potential for a 9-9.5 out of ten score.









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  • From ANON - roxas on August 11, 2006
    that was awsome but short
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  • From ANON - Leah Phillips on August 04, 2006
    Oh oh oh naughty Kimmie. I hope that wasn't Shego watching, as she'd kill then. But you've got to let Ron get him some of Shego. Shego is so sexy, she'd pleasure Ron so much better then Princess can. If it was Yori... well fuck Yori you've always been third place on the RonOmeter. Its Shego Kim Yori for the gorgeous Ron Stoppable. I'd like to see a foursome with those three girls and Ron. But if it doesn't happen its no problem, just as long as Yori doesn't get any and Ron gets plenty of Shego and Kim.

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  • From ANON - dave69812 on August 03, 2006
    Interesting,will shego join in and enjoy a lil ronshine too??
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  • From ANON - Kothoga on August 03, 2006
    Great story you got. but you should really grammar and check your work before publishing.
    Either way I'm waiting for the next part
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  • From ANON - Anonymous on July 26, 2006
    Go for A. That would be a great way for Ron to find out about Kim and Shego. Right as they're about to do him.
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  • From ANON - Anonymous on July 26, 2006
    I'd say that Ron should say that he wants to start dating. It should help if he has no idea of what happened with Josh. That way Kim would feel that he's willing to take a really big risk in asking Kim. That and she wouldn't feel like he was trying to take advantage of her in any way.
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  • From ANON - the other dave on July 25, 2006
    I wonder if ron's training in monkee kung fu will have both girls purring like kittens when he gets them both in the sack
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  • From ANON - Blaze on July 25, 2006
    Go with A.^_^
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  • From ANON - Anonymous on July 25, 2006
    I'd say they should go to Shego's house. They could easily be seen in the car, and I don't think that Kim would be comfortable like that. While, I don't think that either wants to forget that it happened.
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