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Reviews for Define 'Incest'

By : Leftshoe
  • From themaster on July 08, 2010
    what was the point of that last 'chapter' the storyline (when present(maybe a better word would be senerio and stile)) was good spelling was ok (for example wraped is spelled with a w) and i liked it keep up the good work
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  • From writer33 on October 28, 2007
    yes another chapter would be nice
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  • From on October 27, 2007
    i really liked the story. I would like to know what you mean by "another", though.
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  • From UzumakiIno on October 11, 2007
    Second chapter was all right, but it seemed very rushed.
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  • From kitsunexmaxwell on February 27, 2007
    Cousin relationships aren't defined as incest in the bible. The US is the only western nation that has laws against cousin couples and most laws made predates modern genetics so are just as prejudiced as segregation laws ^^'

    Interesting story, love the couple. Also, Ben and Gwen share the same day for their birthdays and both are 10 years old in the series.

    Good luck and Happy Writing
    -K.M.
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  • From ANON - random dude on January 03, 2007
    Encore!!!Encore!!!Encore!!!Encore!!!Encore!!!Encore!!!Encore!!!Encore!!!
    Encore!!!Encore!!!Encore!!!Encore!!!Encore!!!Encore!!!Encore!!!Encore!!!
    Encore!!!Encore!!!Encore!!!Encore!!!Encore!!!Encore!!!Encore!!!Encore!!!
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  • From ANON - horny idiot on January 03, 2007
    Make more chapters. I hardly go off on this insest/ minor fic. hahaha.
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  • From ANON - weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee on January 01, 2007
    Awesome, your probably one of the best writers on AFF. Why the hell is there so much Yaoi for this series???
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  • From ANON - The Black Miroku on December 29, 2006
    This was a good story...but the paragraphs wer placed too close together...other than that it was good just add more...content.
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  • From ANON - cio on December 28, 2006
    im glad your saying more chapters but you should have put more detail into
    chapter 2
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  • From ANON - me on December 24, 2006
    ben and gwen are both the same age
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  • From ANON - lainofthewired on December 18, 2006
    This fandom needs more fics like this :3
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  • From ANON - cio on December 14, 2006
    Dude WTH UPDATE PLZ IM WAITING MAN HURRY
    but dont rush out a story
    just start writing one
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  • From ANON - ..... on November 23, 2006
    this story is pretty good please update. and maybe make another story with the same pairing
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  • From ANON - cio on November 21, 2006
    are you ever going to update this please its awsome
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