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Reviews for Kim Possible meets Danny Phantom

By : tetsunami
  • From ANON - mike on July 28, 2006
    um please review, this one actually looks good lol
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  • From ANON - Shawn Evans on July 24, 2006
    You could do a lot with the whole 'mistaken identity' thing. For instance, Shego captures Jazz by mistake (she was trying to capture Kim). Then Shego could mind control Jazz or something.
    Or Danny flies in his ghost form and lands on top of someone he thinks is Kim, and then becomes solid and makes out with her, except it's really his sister Jazz.
    Or Kim charms Jack & Maddie when Danny brings Kim over to FentonWorks. They admire Kim's ghost-hunting skills (Kim's so unlike their useless kids), so Jack & Maddie make Kim a member of their ghost-hunting team and then so much more. (so Kim does the whole family? Because Jazz would admire Kim, too). This would really tick Danny off - Kim becomes much better at everything he does. Even Sam & Tucker like Kim better.


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  • From ANON - INC on July 20, 2006
    I am not trying to be mean but how about writing something, there is a suggestion. I hate really short chapters; especially ones that you can't really call a tease. It is just something to annoy you and makes you feel like you have wasted your time.
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  • From ANON - Morris on July 20, 2006
    awesome! you should have Danny and Shego do it, and then have them get caught. Maybe some upcomming threesome with Danny/Kim/Shego? Oh and it would be cool if you told us what was going on with Ron Sam and Tucker. Best of luck!
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  • From tidalshark on July 19, 2006
    you could be going somewhere in this story. so continue. id like to see what happens with Danny and Kim :D
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 19, 2006
    This is probably the best cross over idea ever. DP meets KP. i wish i could see more of this.
    btw hurry up with the next chapter man
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  • From ANON - Morris on July 19, 2006
    the first chapter was eh. and the second chapter was less eh. But the end of chapter 2 was exciting. hope it stays that way! best of luck

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  • From sqevans on July 18, 2006
    A changing room scene? Come on, you can do better than that!
    These stories would be a lot better if the writers plotted them out before writing them, instead of lurching from inconsequential scene to superfluous chapter. You want a locker room scene? Danny goes 'ghost' when the bad guy (or Kim/Ron?) attacks him, sending him through the walls and into the girls locker room! See? Easy! Or reverse it, and have the action (that's action, as in fighting bad guy action, also known as a plot!) involve Kim & Ron being knocked into the locker room.
    Try and try some more. It's not that hard!
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