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Reviews for Zim against the world

By : Darkplaygirl
  • From ANON - Beccamomo on August 14, 2006
    Dude, you should TOTALLY continue this! Its soooo good! ^^
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  • From ANON - Masks-san on August 13, 2006
    Hmm, as for starting over or not, well, I don't really mind either way. If you think that a new story would be time better spent, then by all means. After coming this far (congrats!) I can understand that you'd be a little hesitent to just drop it. In all honesty, the story does seem a little confused. Dib in particular acts pretty random at times. But your writing style has improved greatly since you started, and so has your grasp of the characters, I'd bet. Starting anew might be a good idea. Don't think, though, that you've in any way failed with this fic; you were just sharpening your skillz. Although if your authors notes were any indication, you've written a lot of this late at night. A great time for coming up with ideas, but not a good time to post, since I, for one, tend to miss a lot of error in my writing and story elements. Well, no matter what you decide, I'll read it. Good luck!

    -Masks
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  • From ANON - Jordan on August 13, 2006
    Noooooooooo! Don't start a new one Zim! I know you think that you screwed up but you haven't and if you think it's because of how long your story is then don't worry because I've read fanfics that have almost sixty chapters in the whole thing that are'nt even finished. If you want to start a new one then you can do a revision of your story after you finish it. Remember it's never good to start something and never finish it. I would be so sad if you started a new story, I like this one : (
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  • From ANON - Krys on August 13, 2006
    I think you should continue this one. I didn't see any point at which you messed up... And it's very good so far. :0
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  • From ANON - Krys on August 11, 2006
    Gah, poor Zim. He's getting so frustrated, isn't he? ^^; I like how you used the Irken gender thing in this chapter. Pretty creative. :0

    Hope you're able to update soon! Oh, and happy birthday to Sarah! ^^
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  • From rinflowers1986 on August 11, 2006
    HAPPY BIRTHDAY!

    I hardly ever get to say that, so I'm happy x3

    Awsomness! I liked how Gir interupted.
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  • From ANON - Jordan on August 10, 2006
    Awww that must seriously suck Zim, hope you get a new one soon. Oh and just to give you a bit of good news I'm not sick anymore (jumping for joy) and that I can now get back to reviewing your story without anything distracting me.
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  • From ANON - Jordan on August 06, 2006
    Way to go Zim! 25 chapters and I gotta say that this chapter has probably got to be your best one yet. The way you put such passion between Dib and Zim in this chapter sent shivers down my spine. And don't worry about nobody reviewing your story anymore, they probably think that you're still on that vacation you were talking about. Keep up the awesome work, your faithful reviewer and reader Jordan : )
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  • From ANON - Krys on August 06, 2006
    Chapter 24 was particularly lovely. I always love conflict between Zim and Dib, especially in ZADR fics like this. And Zim's affectionate behavior is still so cute! It makes me giggle. >w< Update soon, yes? :0
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  • From rinflowers1986 on August 06, 2006
    Zim has quite alot of insecurities. Really a side of him rarely ever seen.
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  • From ANON - Jordan on August 02, 2006
    The chapter was great Zim. I also know what it feels like to be depressed, it really sucks, that's why I take Zoloft. Hope you feel better, your dedicated reader, Jordan.
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  • From rinflowers1986 on August 02, 2006
    Nice game, had me worried for a second. I though Dib was really going to hurt Zim, but that just made it all the more enjoyable to read.
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  • From ANON - Krys on August 02, 2006
    Zim just acts so...CUTE in this story, and without meaning to. I love it! I just wanna hug him! xD But then Dib would probably get all possesive-like. :

    That water-gun thing amused the heck out of me. Mostly because, 1.) I wasn't expecting it, and 2.) Zim getting all defensive about it. So...CUTE! ((dies of cute overload))

    Can't wait for the next chapter~ ((squees and squats down to wait)) *_*
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  • From ANON - Jordan on August 01, 2006
    Wow, that is a good picture. This chapter was also great Zim, the way you described the base made me feel as if I was actually in it. The room with the blankets made me feel sleepy though, I'm gonna take a nap now : ) I'll be better in a few days, keep up the good work.
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  • From rinflowers1986 on August 01, 2006
    You've done it again!
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