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By : Fanatical
  • From ANON - Dutchman on June 04, 2006
    Great story so far. Waiting for more.
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  • From ANON - memmy on February 13, 2006
    Hi and thanks for your great story!
    I hope you'll keep writing this story and don't get lost in some trivial thingie called everyday life ^.~ It's sad that there are so few other Mulan-fics here.
    A little bit of constructive criticism: Sometimes the dialog sounds a bit too American, I don't say I'm anything of an expert of how Asian people adress or talk to each other but still...
    Otherwise I loved it ^^
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  • From ANON - Whatever101 on February 12, 2006
    sounds good update soon
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  • From ANON - Lina on January 04, 2006
    Oooo I like this story. I'm really hoping you will continue it and if needs be write how he reacts once he realizes the soldier who took down his army was the girl who he saved (and saved him). I await the next installment (chapter five or six... whichever number your at) eagerly.
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  • From ANON - clavira on December 23, 2005
    Awww... come ON! You know we're all curious, won't you satisfy our curiousity? Pleeeeease?!?! (By the way: this ff sounds like a lot of fun, I like it ^^) Update soon(er), please?
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 14, 2005
    sweet
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 28, 2005
    LOVE IT!!!! I wanna know what happens next, please update soon!!
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  • From ANON - Explosivefruit911 on November 23, 2005
    Love it!!!!!Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - lightbird on November 19, 2005
    Yay! You updated! Good chapter! I really like the extra, original scenes that you've created in this story. Did Mulan help Shan-Yu escape?
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  • From ANON - Alisha on November 11, 2005
    I loved it very much! Please finish it, I really want to see what happens!!
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  • From lightbird on November 07, 2005
    Good job so far! I like the idea of them meeting before the scene in the Tung Shao Pass when he's about to slash at her. And I like the portrayal of Shan - you made him human, with a code of honor and his own side of the story instead of the one-dimensional, hawk-eyed villain from the Disney movie (I tried to do the same thing in my Shan-Yu story). Keep up the great work! I look forward to reading more.

    And thanks for reviewing my story also.

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  • From on November 06, 2005
    POST MORE PRETTY PRETTY PLEASE!


    i cant wait for some hun action! ;)
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  • From ANON - me on October 04, 2005
    definetly interesting keep this up
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  • From ANON - ShiokoRyusaki on September 23, 2005
    This is a great story, I can't wait for the next chapter. Plz cont. the great work.
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  • From ANON - Jenjen on August 26, 2005
    Love it Love It!!!! More Please!!!!
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