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Reviews for Kiss of Fire

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  • From ANON - Zuza on January 16, 2017

    I just reread this story. You created a beautiful story,a beautiful legend,and made me hope that I have a soulmate in this world,and that I will find it. That I will find my very own Zuko. Thank you <3


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  • From ANON - J on January 06, 2016
    I liked the story. I loved the whole soulmates/meant for each other thing. I was surprised at how Zuko is bossing Katara so much,especially in a beginning. The whole scene when he uncovered that she wore his mark above her breast,was not nice of him. I missed Iroh,a lot. And was disappointed at the way Zuko treated his son in the beginning,very bad dad award. He should have known better. But i loved the style of writing,loved the story,it sounded real in a way ( there is a lot of terrible fanfiction out there xD ) Anyway ,keep up the work,and post 4! Just don't kill Zuko in it. P.S. I absolutely hated the name Miumi. Ciao!
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  • From ANON - Jazz RaErb on December 04, 2015
    Hey CultofStrawberry!
    Is been a long time ago that I read this story. I decided to read it all of it again (Slow heat and kiss of fire).
    You got me hooked again! I can't wait for the part 4 of the epilogue!
    Thanks for this awesome stories! It does truly takes you in to the story like you are seeing it!
    Hope to read from you soon!
    Merry Christmas 2015!!!
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  • From ANON - Baxter on June 08, 2015
    So I have to say this was fantastic. Over the last 2 weeks I have been reading slow heat and kiss of fire. I feel lost now that it's all done - is there some way to do an epilogue of the epilogue? I need to know about the baby and if Kuzon ended up with Ying-Ying. So many things! Anyway, i just want to let you know that your stories were fantastic and I know I will come back and read them again :)
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  • From ANON - Stephanie on June 22, 2014
    I loved this story! I read the first one, and cried when I found out what happened, and of course gobbled up the alternate ending! How you made this second part work though was amazing!! I had some problems with how harsh Zuko was in the beginning, but looking back I get why. I still have questions on what will happen, but I feel the story is still complete with those unanswered. Great job!!!
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  • From ANON - cimh on April 10, 2014
    VERYVERYVERYVERY GOOD! PLEASE DON'T STOP!!!! :)
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  • From ANON - MudbloodMalfoy on March 29, 2014
    I'm seeing a confrontation coming. haha. Can't wait for the next chapter! :)
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  • From ANON - MudbloodMalfoy on March 25, 2014
    Aaahhh I caught up. haha. Can't wait for the next chapter. One quick thing, though. In one chapter, you had the Ember Island theater owner as Mei or something similar, then in another chapter you had her as Ming. Isn't that Katara's fighting tutor? Or did I miss something? Also, do you have scheduled updates? That way I can know when to be on the lookout and not add more hits to the story.

    Anyways, great job so far. :)
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  • From ANON - SmilingHoney on December 22, 2013
    I found your stories this weekend on that other site (;-) ) and had to follow you here. I love, love, love your style of writing! I've enjoyed your stories so much that I've been up all night catching up on Kiss of Fire. I hope this isn't the end and there's more. Pretty please? Keep up the awesome work! You just got another fan hooked to you and Zutara!
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  • From ANON - Rose on November 26, 2013
    So super happy that you gave us another chapter! I love the emotion in this chapter, you know how to make us understand. Can't wait for another update!!
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  • From ANON - Rose on November 18, 2013
    This chapter was full of different emotions, even though I already read your story more than once, it still doesn't make it any easier. Nonetheless, strong chapter. I still can't wait for more chapters!
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  • From ANON - Rose on November 17, 2013
    I cannot wait for more chapters to come out! I check back every day!
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  • From ANON - Amaterasu on October 20, 2013
    This review is for both Slow Heat and Kiss of Fire, as I just got caught up to speed with the two stories.

    I really, genuinely must complement you on this story. I NEVER review after I read something, but in your case, I feel compelled to do so. Not only is your writing superb besides a few typos here and there, the story arc and events keep me interested. Reading your story has caused me to want to rewatch the Avatar series, as the events that you added between Zuko and Katara are noticeable, but they fit SO WELL with the overall arc of the actual series that it's impressive. I literally haven't been able to put my phone down because I've been reading. When Katara was killed, I was..actually upset. I love reading fictions that can bring about strong emotions from the reader. Anger when Katara died. Sadness when everyone was informed and she was sent to be buried. Betrayal when Zuko fathered other children. Fear when he tried to pull Kuzon and Katara apart with such intense scenes of turbulence. Jealousy at the way Zuko and Katara are in bed. The list goes on and on. The characters are portrayed beautifully, and all of their stories are lively and believable. As I read your stories, I wanted so badly for Katara to fall pregnant, as it was never mentioned that Miumi knows how to bend..that. I am excited to find out how it turns out. I feel like Katara should voice more of her want to bare her own child, as she is still young and would naturally want that. When I imagine Zuko finding out, I imagine him berating her and Katara threatening to rip the fetus from her womb to make her "beloved husband" happy.

    Just my thoughts on the matter. I sincerely look forward to your update. You are a magnificent author.
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  • From ANON - Rose on October 15, 2013
    I'm so excited that you put two new chapters up! I was looking forward to it so much that when I seen the new chapters I read them immediately! Keep up the wonderful work and post more soon please!
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  • From ANON - Lily on October 14, 2013
    Wow, I'm very impressed with this story, and definitely glad that it is being updated (this site isn't very helpful telling me when you last wrote things, I had to infer from the comment dates that it is being updated). I'll be keeping an eye on your other works, as well!
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