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By : Spleef

From lavenderhilllove on February 28, 2010
Thank you for updating! This is my favorite story and I just get so excited reading further into it. Please update soon!
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From ANON - Google girl on February 10, 2010
you gotta update. I am on fire
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From InkHeart17 on January 04, 2010
Oh yes, I very much like the tweaks made at the end for a more emotional reunion! You did a really good job with this chapter, and I'm definitely anxious to see you post another soon.
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From ANON - LadyRin98790 on January 02, 2010
Aw! I want to read more but I know I have to wait T-T I really enjoy your story and I like the twist to it ^^ Hope you update soon, and I was just wondering... do you update the version on FF.Net at the same time as this one? If you could just email me I would apprceiate it, if you can't access my email here just search on FF.Net as my name I reviewed under is my penname ^^ Hope your writing goes well
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From ANON - LadyRin98790 on January 01, 2010
Hey! Wanted to drop a reveiw towards ya! Love this story so much ^^ makes the fangirl in me jump up and down I haven't finished yet but I would be further had I not had to work T-T Well, I am a member on FF.Net and that's where I started reading this but then I decided that the parts that were left out (in mu opinion) help make the story what it is ^^ So now I'm reading it on here ^^ good luck with your next chapter!
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From ANON - LavenderHillLove on January 01, 2010
Thank you for the update. I am excited to read more!
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From ANON - Emma on November 28, 2009
jhgdfjgkhfdjgh WHAT

you cannot leave it like this, my god.

i've read through slow heat and this in about three days, and jghfkjghfdjhg hearts. HEARTS FOR ZUKO. and iroh. even though he's dead. /sob

so many hearts.
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From ANON - Soteria on November 16, 2009
hey-

i have omg enjoyd our story. this one and slow heat. i was utterly cushed when Katara died, but i read u wrote anohr one, a continuation. it made me very happy. now i hav been enjoying kiss of fire and i desperately want to know wh happens to katara on her journey. she's going to look for either aang or someone else of importance huh? i'm so glad that she got her memories back. honestly, i was getting tired ofher being called miumi but oh well. i cant wait for the next part. ur an extremely talented writer.

my best- Tori
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From lavenderhilllove on November 02, 2009
Not a cliff hanger!! I really can't wait for another update. I'm so excited that Katara finally remembered who she is. You're an amazing writer. Please update soon!!
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From Zarrthtion on October 03, 2009
please mistress spleef bless us with more kiss of fire i wait on bended knee for more or your work
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From Zarrthtion on October 02, 2009
wow the story is still so fresh and good and the kidnapping was fun to read im finally happy to see her fight someone
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From Zarrthtion on September 30, 2009
Ch.9 Battle for Affection was by far one of my favs jus wat happens betweens the three of them was so strong and fun to read not knowing wat happens next
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From Zarrthtion on September 27, 2009
once again just wow great story im on chapter 9 now hope to read alot 2day
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From Zarrthtion on September 27, 2009
i just read the first 5chapters of K.O.S and its good a nice start and very funny and a little sad too just thinking on how "Tara: died in S.H but i hope that it gets better
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From ANON - Maria on September 26, 2009
I totally understand what you're saying about an author cherishing her reviews, and because I totally agree with you, and because your story is so long and AWESOME, I think you deserve a long, honest and proper review :

I have finally made it to chapter 43 and I just have to say BRAVO! KATARA is finally back! I'm so happy to see her here and acting like herself. This is truly one of the most well-written, intelligent stories I have ever read. I honestly look forward to reading your other stories (I'm brand new to the fandom) and from what I see, you are the best, hands down. You are talented, GIFTED even, and I hope you never stop. I really want to share some thoughts with you, and I love that you're so willing to read feedback.

I have to be honest (and this is absolutely not a criticism)I was hoping for a redemptive arc for Zuko in terms of how he treats his wife, similar to what happened with the adorable Kuzon. I'm so pissed at Zuko, lol! You've got me emotional! I understand that you have written him as a complicated man and his many layers and his general attitude are intentional. So I think his being a jerk is what you intended. We're coming to the end and he's still pretty much a jerk, and I think you're doing a good job keeping him in character. I've seen so many stories in which a character's personality does a 180 out of nowhere, so this is a sign of superb writing. So in order to change how he treats his wife (he really has treated her badly no matter how much stuff he buys her), he would need to have some lightbulb moment, as he did with Kuzon. I would just love to see something like this.

I know he always makes a big show of telling Miumi/Katara he wants her opinions and that he loves and respects her, but let's face it. This is just talk. This is a man who kidnapped her and essentially blackmailed her father into letting her go. The only thing that has changed is that she has stopped fighting him. I still see him as a kidnapper, and a rapist almost. (What Enki did, kidnapping her, is not much different to what Zuko did, and to be honest, what Zuko did was worse) It's almost like those men who snatch women off the streets and force them into being sex slaves, except Zuko has made her queen and buys her trinkets, which still does not change the fact that she's a prisoner.
He has never admitted to her that his ripping her family apart was wrong, he just kept informing her that she just had to accept it and be grateful and honored for her abduction. And Miumi eventually just rolled over and took it (I think this may be Stockholm Syndrome). So I don't think Zuko has changed at all, it's just that his captive has submitted to his will, so he's calmed down. Yes he speaks to her in a nicer way now, but it's only because he's won, and she has totally submitted to being controlled, mentally and physically by him. He no longer needs to bark commands at her, though he still does it from time to time. Zuko's still posessive, obsessive, contolling and emotionally abusive as ever (which again, I know is your intention.)

Enki was right: Miumi IS still Zuko's prisoner. What little freedom he has conned her into thinking she has, is still within the bounds of his absolute control. Zuko thinks buying her stuff, paying for lessons and saying the words "I love you" equate love, but love also means freedom and respect, which he does NOT give her. (The diary incident is proof that he has no intention of respecting her..I think he's sorry about what he did for now, and the new diary is nice, but I don't think he will ever change how he treats her. He feels ashamed about the baby, but if that never happened he would never have changed his attitude about the diary). I'm hoping that Katara being back will finally force Zuko to treat her like an equal, in deeds, not just words. No more of her rolling over and collapsing to the floor murmuring 'My Lord', no more commanding her into bed, and commanding sex, and if Zu Zu thinks this is what will happen, lol he has another thing coming. I love this story (despite spending 98% of the time being disgusted with Zuko, and with Miumi for simpering and being a meek and mild, willing to be controlled prisoner/wife, occasional flare ups notwithstanding).

I really hope Katara informs him that no matter what sense of entitlement he had, Miumi deserved to be courted and recieve an actual marriage proposal. If Zuko truly loved her and not just desired to immediately possess her, he would have cared enough to woo her, court her entire family and have enough respect to involve them in the wedding. And to actually allow her to go visit them, for Pete's sake, not just dictate that they should leave their homes to come visit her. I doubt he would have been able to pull this crap on Katara. So I'm really hoping Zuko is taught a lesson, that true love means you charm the person and allow them the freedom to enter your life or not, not force them kicking and screaming all the way. Miumi made it too easy for him, and eventually fell for his manipulations, which as I said, is probably Stockholm Syndrome. Katara being back should finally force him to stop being such a selfish, cruel jerk. And her being the strong and bossy Katara we all know and love, Zuko will now be forced to accept BEING commanded instead of giving commands, lol. I think that would be absolute poetic justice.

As I said, you are a gifted writer and the fact that you are able to make me feel all these emotions is a testament to how much of a writing goddess you are. I just wanted to tell you some of my thoughts and to let you know that you NEED to keep it up. As a writer myself, I understand that reviews are our currency, and we are greedy, ;)
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