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Reviews for Kiss of Fire

By : Spleef
  • From ANON - Kitty on September 08, 2010
    I love this story. I do hope that Katara gets her baby, though. Zuko already has children, yeah, but a girl can want her line to continue, too. Even if he does worry about losing her, I hope he can understand that. I hope you update soon :)
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  • From ANON - Emily on September 06, 2010
    Wow! Been reading this story non-stop and I have to say it is wonderful, but then again most of your stories are! I've read a few and I am always increasingly amazed at the way you develop your characters. I am on pins and needles awaiting an update and until then i will be reading your other stories which I'm sure will be just as good.
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  • From ANON - Emily on September 05, 2010
    To be honest with you, I think in general any story that claims to be a reincarnation or any sort of dramatic change to a main character for that matter, to be a Mary-Sue in shipper clothing so to speak. But after reading your other 'Zutara' fics, and seeing your drawings as well as, I found myself curious enough to risk reading what i assumed would be a disapointing story. How wrong I was! This story proves my earlier theory incorrect, it is possible to have a reincarnation story that is worth reading and is not a poorly disguised Mary-Sue.... I love this story and all the others I have read by you!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 29, 2010
    Awesome fic, love all the arcs youve created...now we just need the end
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  • From jazzy021 on August 24, 2010
    I been reading this story ALL WEEKEND all night hahaha!! love ALL of your stories and this is my TOP FAVORITE OF THEM ALL!! please don't take long to continue I'm really eager to continue reading!!
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  • From ANON - Krystan on August 20, 2010
    Thank you for updating Hot Water a couple of days ago! I found your fanfictions about a month ago and have been reading them almost nonstop since then, and I've finished with everything Avatar! :( Your stories are wonderful, and you "get" the characters - their personalities are spot on! I eagerly await more updates and Zutara goodness! If I may, though, I have only a small bit of criticism. While I love your writing style in its coherent-ness and formality, I feel that the same formality creeps its way into the dialogue, and there are many characters that just don't speak formally. Other than that, your stories are my favorite fanfiction ever! :)
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  • From pyromaniac1101 on July 20, 2010
    I'm on Chapter 33: Amendments of Kiss of Fire. I had decided to look up good Zutara after my horrible experience with the Last Airbender movie. T_T I originally found Slow Heat before I discovered it was a prequeal. I really enjoy reading your stories. The grammar and spelling makes it feel like I'm reading an actual book and not a fanfic, so thank you for that. I would have reviewed before but I didn't have an account. I decided to make one, so that I could tell you that I appreciate the hard work you put into your stories. The characters are not OOC and stick to their original personalities well. You also do a good job of not overloading the story with OCs like a few other authors. I thought the original ending for Slow Heat was sad but original and I loved the alternate ending. I can't wait to finish reading Kiss of Fire and finding out what happens when Miumi/Katara remembers her past, or even if she does. I read books frequently and always love suspense. You leave out enough answers to allow the readers to speculate what will happen without leaving us confused. Thank you and please keep writing. ^_^
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  • From ANON - savvy vyvyan on July 19, 2010
    noooooo
    i am so used of having another awesome chapter ahead of me
    i looked around for the next chapter button and it wasn't there *weeps*

    The reunion was as amazing as i hoped it would be ever since the beginning.

    i had been hanging out for sokka and aang and suki to interact with her as katara and it finally happened YAY

    can i just say THANKYOU for how great you have made Aang in this...
    everything about him is superb from his appearance to his circumstances to his in-characterness

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  • From ANON - savvy vyvyan on July 19, 2010
    so you ended the worst chapter that you have ever written with some mud wrestling.
    at least the laughing out loud went some of the way to repair my damage neurons after those...
    NIGHTMARISH REVELATIONS!!!
    zuko and toph????
    WHAT WERE YOU THINKING!!!!!
    zuko and toph???
    NO NO NO NO NO

    and having a child???
    talk about adding insult to injury!!!
    ahh i really hate that you have done this

    as for Toph's character, i'm not sure what i think now. at first i thought that her insults/attitude were ooc because yes she has attitude and loves to insult people but it is all done goodnaturedly. she was just being snarky and snide it seemed so far. UNTIL the whole sugar queen thing and now i figure she just knew about the whole reincarnation and was trying to 'unearth' (yay! pun!) katara...

    have i mentioned today that i LOVE YOUR STORIES...
    (despite the horrendous travesty you committed with your zutoph)

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  • From ANON - savvy vy on July 19, 2010
    yay
    toph

    so happy to see you

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  • From ANON - savvy vy on July 19, 2010
    you manage to pack so many emotions into each chapter
    horror, fear, excitement, revenge, relief, overjoy, sighs of contentment, awws of love

    soo glad enki didn't touch miumi
    and his comeuppance was fantastic
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  • From ANON - savvy vyvyan on July 19, 2010
    eeewwwwwww enki is sooo gross!
    spleef, if you let him touch miumi i will not be impressed only writhing on the floor in disgust and ewishness

    but YAY firenation ship on the horizon...

    save her zuzu!!!
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  • From ANON - savvy vyvyan on July 19, 2010
    wow
    enki really is that dumb
    hmmm i wonder whether his kidnapping the firelord's son/wife will end well...
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  • From ToriYummemiya on July 10, 2010
    arg! y havent you uploaded anything more??? its so good!! i hope nothing happens when zuko gets there. that would be all bad. oo and the avitar, sigh upload soon plz plz plz??!
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  • From ANON - jess9450 on June 28, 2010
    PLEASE Please Please update your story soon - I'm on the edge of my seat to find out what happens next!!
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