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By : Spleef
  • From Luvan on November 23, 2007
    this is so good i love it
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  • From ANON - Sargonie on November 20, 2007
    Yay! Zuko to the rescue! ...I'd hope that things could come to pass in the next chapter without an actual engagement of fighting, but considering Enki's IQ (-37) I don't think that's gonna happen. Which makes me worry for Kuzon!! The poor dear! So cold, and lonesome! And Miumi's predicament is just as awful, even if she's being fed and whatnot. Eeew. I'm glad that Enki was childish enough to reject her for being 'unclean'. And I liked in this chapter how you showed Miumi's intelligence once again, through her actions. Like how Kamas commented back in the confrontation with Enki as they were leaving Omashu, Miumi assesed the situation, and was able to find the best way to hopefully escape unscathed. Thank you so very much for updating! And we all know that there is no way Zuko will leave Enki on the throne after this. So after all the hullabaloo has died down, who can we look forward to as the next Earth King?
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  • From ANON - Bee on November 20, 2007
    Let the fight begin! Zuko is going to kill them! You don't mess with a man's wife and child and think you are going to get away with it!?!

    I love your story and I can't wait until you update again!!
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  • From ANON - Michelle on November 19, 2007
    I have enjoyed reading your story so much! Your a great writer and I love your plot. I can't wait till your next chapter and wish it speed!
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  • From DarkRoseofChaos on November 19, 2007
    Poor Miumi/Katara! I hope Zuko beats the ever loving shit out of Enki!! How could anyone be so mean to a child *cries* I was half hoping for Miumi to find some random knowlege of waterbending and completely obliterate Enki. Then freeze his testicles off.. Well, again, your stories are never a dissapointment. Please update soon!

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  • From BeyondSight on November 18, 2007
    Review of SpleefMistress' story "Kiss of Fire"

    To start out, your prologue and opening was not as eye catching or trapping as it was in COTM.
    In COTM the prologue itself caught me and I couldn't stop reading.
    It is a rather good one here, but there is always room for improvement. :3

    Katara's dead!?!? Oh no!

    Okay, the opening of Chapter 2... THAT REALLY makes me want to read on.
    Hmmm.... That is something I've noticed... Everyone is looking beyond Zuko's scar.
    Like it doesn't affect who he is, but I guess that's an entirely different discussion.
    I'm liking how you are incorporating the idea of reincarnation into this story. It brings a nice touch.
    "what was rightfully mine" ... uh oh, I sense a forbidden romance ...XD
    "My decision was made" lol.. I smell trouble...

    I don't like the way Zuko threatens Katara in chapter 2.. it seems unlike him.
    Kamas is a nice touch. He seems a wise advisor


    That is something I keep noticing in your stories. A man falls in love with the woman. The woman doesn't want it at first but grows to love him back. :3

    Wait... what? A sedan? A vehicle?... ..... ummm.... yeah Not too many people know that definition methinks.










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  • From luna26 on November 18, 2007
    another great chapter. Hope the bastard gets what's coming to him :) Keep up the great work, I look forward to your next update
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  • From ANON - INC on November 18, 2007
    Slow and painful torture would just not be enough for our friend Enki...I am not quite sure what I would do to him but it would invole knives and sensitive areas of the body(hint).

    It is so great to know there are still authors who write story with plot, and reasons for the actions of the characters. I myself am not a writer and if I did I am sure that aff would imploy a NEGATIVE ratings system just for me. But enough about that, you keep writing because this is worth the reading as well as are all your other works.
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  • From ANON - Saya-kun on November 18, 2007
    Damn, Enki deserves a kick where it hurts most -_-; Get 'im, Zuko! *dramatic shaking of the fist*

    This is a great story! I wish you'd update more often, but I see you have other projects going on, so it's all good ^_^
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  • From ANON - Anon. on November 18, 2007
    Excellent work as usual! I'm eager to see how the next chapter plays out. This chapter made me laugh in some places, feel sad in others. Great chapter!
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  • From ANON - Rei on November 18, 2007
    Thank god!! finally. We can be rid of that brat enki!!! please please please make sure his death is SLOW and PAINFUL!!! i hate his guts -_-( i don't care if he's fictional... i still hate him) and I love this story.
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  • From ANON - CoffeeGyrl on November 18, 2007
    Who-ho here comes the calvery. I like how you have her play the part and the unclean line was good. You do a good job of keeping this story in the historical context. And as always keeping my Zuzu's hard outer shell with the creamy filling that I so love about his character. Given what delight you wrote for Katara being taken by Zuko by the pirates I really can't wait to see what you're going to do in the next few episodes.
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  • From ANON - Scarylady on November 17, 2007
    You're writing of Enki is much better in this chapter. He's less stupidly childish and more menacing :) Jeez, he's such a jerk!
    Poor Kuzon! Oooh, I hope Enki recieves a...just punishment for his cruelty. Preferibly delt out by Muimi. After all, he messed with *her* baby. Nobody messes with Kuzon, not even the boy's father.
    Yay for updates! :D
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  • From ANON - Saiiou-chan on October 27, 2007
    Wow, nice work, this is definatly not your run of the mill Zutara. Though I have to say after watching tonights Avatar, I kinda feel guilty for hoping for this pairing now. When I thought Aang was ment to be alone, I didn't feel to bad, Zuko got Katara, and Sokka took Toph. Now I wanna kick myself, because I'm still hoping for it, and the new episode showed me different. Though the twist in there I would not have seen coming if I had writen it myself, talk about weird.
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  • From ANON - Sargonie on October 25, 2007
    Fhaven is down, I didn't know where to find your stuff. But I found it again, so that is good. Aaar! Stupid Earth King! I can't believe that the bastard is related to Bumi. May I hope that this will bring Avatar Aang into the fray? Possibly Toph Beifong? Or Sokka? I've been wondering since you started the story what will happen when more people who knew Katara meet Miumi. And poor Kuzon! No! Your Mama will keep you safe! Sorta! Please update soon, I'll go mad with the need to find out what happened. Thanks for updating, great chapter.
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