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Reviews for Kiss of Fire

By : Spleef

From CoffeeGyrl on June 30, 2008
Man Enki must be shitting kittens right now. The tension is very thick, and good. I'm loving how you're drawing out this tension. It was sweet to hear from Suki and Toph on the counsel. I'm dying to see what you do as a punishment. How about apointing a new queen instead of a king? The discription of the costumes are great.
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From ANON - Hasu on June 27, 2008
I was just re-reading this [I'm currently at ch 8] and though I love this story and am enjoying it once again. God, I really wanted to smack the crap out of Katara/Miumi. I know with Zuko being Zuko and with the time period that Avatar is set in and just a number of other factors that she's not out of character but at the same time I just want her to turn around to Zuko and Kamas and just GAH! I don't know. For some reason tonight as I was reading I just wanted her to fight it more, why I don't know I just did lol. I just wanted to share that ^_^

However, enjoyed the story the first time and once again enjoying it for the second.
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From ANON - Mira on June 17, 2008
Still loving it~!

Enki should be...hmm...put him in a very hot cell, then put him in a very cold one! Give him the same fever as Kuzon did. Haha.

And may I note that throughout the recent updates of your stories, the biiig space is very evident.
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From ANON - Giselle on June 02, 2008
first off,
i would like too say i've been following your story's for a long time
and they are AMAZING! :)

Your so gifted and talented, and u keep me entertained,
so thank you for that. :)

I love how you structure your storys
with the point of veiws of Zuko, Katara, and Kuzon.

It's unique and brilliant!! :D

Please continue with this
you are my HERO!!! :)

P.s. I hope the new chapters up soon :p

Don't be a stranger please write back :)
xxx
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From LaSharna on May 31, 2008
I just wanted to say that I just finished reading the "Kiss of Fire" story arc that you have... and it was brilliant, i really enjoyed the story line and how you kept Zuko in character. Im really looking forward to the next instalment and wish you all the best with it.
La'Sharna
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From ANON - Monkey D. Robbie on May 20, 2008
Here�s part 2 of my review of da latest chapter in da epic fic known only as Kiss of Fire.

First thing I want to comment on is character interaction. Its nice to see Kuzon interact with someone else besides his mother than Miumi/Katara, I know the boy is young & everything a needs a lot of parental guidance, but please don�t do it at the expense of making Kuzon a momma�s boy. I mean there nothing is wrong with being a momma�s boy its just I don�t want to see da boy become too dependent on Miumi/Katara.

Next interaction I would like to comment on is Miumi/Katara�s interaction with Toph. I enjoy seeing tension that the two have for one another. Its shows that death cannot sever the ties of relationship no matter what, however Toph needs to slow her role as well as Miumi/Katara before these two instigate a political war between their houses & nations. I suppose Miumi/Katara could learn to be a little more patient & deal with Toph�s blunt & direct attitude seeing how she is the Fire Lord�s wife & everything & Toph could be a little more sensitive to this new incarnation of Katara. I just pray Zuko doesn�t get between those 2.

It was very nice to see a family reunion between parents & daughter. It�s a shame that they couldn�t express their true feelings for one another under the peering eyes of fire nation personal. The only thing I would�ve like to see in this section of the chapter was more interaction between An Mei & Miumi/Katara, the whole time it was just Miumi/Katara and her pa talking.

I was very surprised to Suki & the Kyoshi Warriors make an appearance. And the meeting between Miumi/Katara & Suki was very interesting especially how Suki kinda help to trigger some sleeping memories within Miumi/Katara. And thank you for allowing Kuzon to spar with da Kyoshi Warriors dem, it kinda subtracts his shy behaviour & gives him the opportunity to come out of his shell & learn to interact with other people than besides his parents. And I�m glad that Miumi/Katara & Suki didn�t get mad or all tight ass when Kuzon called Miumi/Katara �mama�. Hopefully one day the boy will be able to call her dat in public maybe or when he gets older or something he can call Miumi/Katara �mother�. That term allows him to still show affection & love to his mama but yet maintain respect for her public status.

Kuzon + Miumi/Katara little goodnight scene was alright and cute it has everything I have come to expect for their relationship. Quick question though Spleef dat boy still havin� nightmares?

And finally the Lord & his wife snuggled up together saying dey love one another & good night. Ya know if Miumi/Katara�s memories every do come back Zuko won�t have have anybody but himself to blame, well for one dat thing he said to her before he fell asleep and also keep her past life a secret from her, I mean sure they kinda resolve da issue when dey was on da ship back to the Fire nation capital but still, dis is Zuko�s wife, Bossy when she gets the chance, persistent, determined, passionate Katara. Zuko should know that she will press the matter time & time again. I wonder what will become of Zuko�s & Miumi/Katara relationship when & if her memories awaken. Will Katara be in the driver�s seat of Miumi body, will Miumi remember her past life & try to return to the after life where her spirit should be, or will she remember & resent Zuko for hiding these facts for the rest of their days?

Spleef I can�t wait to see what you have in store for your next chapter man ROCK ON MAN!

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From ANON - Monkey D. Roby on May 12, 2008
Yo Spleef I must commend you man this was quite the chapter.

First thing I want to discuss is Enki's punishment. Now I thought long and hard about dis & let me tell you it wasn't easy.

Let's look at the scenarios, if Enki is executed it may make Zuko look like a feudal lord in this new era of peace that he played a pivotal role to create. There entails the theme of hypocrisy. Which is bad for Zuko because he's a good guy now, with a wife & kid, & while his nation wouldn't dare question his judgement, you still have to take into account the other nations.

Giving Omashu back to Zuko may make amends, but dats only in the monetary sense. There is still the X Factor of Enki.

So that kinda only leaves one option left Enki should be stripped of his crown and exiled on a island, but not just an ordinary a fire nation island. Enki should be exiled on a fire nation island and left there to die! What better punishment can there be then to exile one in a nation he despises, plus its a good security measure to make sure he doesn't do dis shit again. Perhaps he can be accomodated on a similar island like the boiling rock. Only thing is na, is we gotta take away his bending abilities otherwise he'll just bend a tunnel or walkpath of the island & take revenge, and that would just SUCK!

So dats da plan leave him on a island to die, I feel that this is the best way for Zuko to get his revenge preserve his image as a fair & just Fire Lord who help to make peace not war.

Dats all I got to say for na I'll post another comment later man peace!
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From CoffeeGyrl on April 27, 2008
I don't think you have Toph OOC, she is in her late 30ties now with a kid of her own, she's not 12 anymore. I love what you did with Suki and having Kuzon sleep with a stuffed dragon is so freaking cute.

I'm at a loss of what to do with Enki, part of me says Angi Kai but that's more for honor, the other part says lunch for the 'masters' dragons. I wonder if Katara should freeze a body part off or something but I'm still mulling it over. This was cute and cool, I liked it.
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From ANON - S on April 23, 2008
I love your fanfiction so much! I am new to this site but i get this feeling that not a lot of stories are as good as yours. I can see the effort that you put in to it and I hate reading stories that look like they were slopped together. I hope you update this and all of your wonderfull stories soon@
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From ANON - Luka on April 22, 2008
I really really reaaaaly like this story! I hope that you update this and all of your wonderfull works soon! Your stories are what keep me going during this loong period in between episodes.

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From ANON - Tasha on April 20, 2008
I just found your story yesterday and have already finished reading it so far. I absolutley love it. I cannot wait to read the rest of it.
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From ANON - Delila on April 20, 2008
oh i just read your entire story
wow it's amazing
i can't wait to see more
it's just so exciting!
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From ANON - Anon. on April 18, 2008
Excellent as always! As far as punishment, I favor stripping Enki of his crown.
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From ANON - cher555 on April 18, 2008
i love it
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From ANON - SKrye on March 04, 2008
Like I already said, I really like this story, however, it makes me inda sad that it's gonna end soon. Your writing is good, and the characters are believable.

CAn't wait for Aang to show up, and best wishes!
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