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Reviews for Kiss of Fire

By : Spleef
  • From moor on August 20, 2008
    YAY!!! Finally the epic bend-off between Toph & M/Katara! :D (And M/Katara's finally getting her memories back !) Does this mean soon she is going to realise her original relationship & its meaning w/ Zuko?

    Loved the way you worked in Enki's childish tantrum (and demand for a concubine? AHAHAHAHAH!) into this chap.

    :D

    Thanks for sharing!
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  • From ANON - luckylily on August 17, 2008
    This update was absolutely PERFECT.;)
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  • From WildWestSamurai on August 13, 2008
    Now, this update was very nice. ^_^

    For one, all the punishments seemed satisfactory enough. Nice wrap-up of the whole Enki fiasco. The details showing how much of a spoiled brat he was made me laugh, for sure.

    As always, characterization, detail, and plot is crisp and spicy. You have a steady hand, my friend. The revelation that Toph's daughter was also Zuko's was sure unexpected. Hehe. A friend who reads this fanfic commented to me that Kuzon and her might become an "item" later in life. Whew! I couldn't help laughing hysterically after this revelation remembering that comment. The reasons behind it seemed sound enough and I liked the response you gave Zuko in reaction to the "accident" question. Very brilliantly put and touching.

    As for the rest....... two words: MUD WRESTLING! ^^ Now, that's the Katara/Toph relationship we all know and love!

    Keep up the excellent work. *two thumbs up*
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  • From luna26 on August 10, 2008
    mudfight!...so awesome
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  • From Bloodsrose on August 09, 2008
    *blinks*

    So NOT loving that Zuko and Toph were together, don't really care how lonely or spontanous it turned out to be. Just my two cents in refrence to that one.

    And the whole fighting for dominance at the end of the chapter at the end, all I gotta say is. Katara/Miumi better kick Toph's ass! It always did bug me how forward/bitchy Toph could be. Katara has been pretty cool with how forward Toph's been, especially since she doesn't really have Katara's memory of experience to draw on. So yeah, interested to see who wins but I'm totally for Katara.
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  • From stealthfic on August 08, 2008
    OMG!!!! Toph and Zuko! I didnt see that coming! Shocked as hell with Adi!!! Ok,I dont know where this is going but hey still a good read... More, more, more.
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  • From ANON - Coppelia on July 16, 2008
    I'm very intrigued by this story and I can't wait until you write more of it, especially since it seems Miumi/Katara's memories will resurface soon.

    My only criticism is that you tend to repeat information we've already read multiple times, for instance Miumi saying that Hana taught her something or another or some random thought about Zuko's treatment of her. It would better your writing significantly if you eliminated or rephrased these repetitions in such a way so that they seem to be fresh thoughts.

    Criticism aside, I truly hope to see more of this story! It has kept me entertained for quite awhile!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 10, 2008
    I am so glad you finally updated.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 09, 2008
    I am so glad that you finally updated this story. I have been impatiently anticipating new chapters.
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  • From ANON - Jo on July 06, 2008
    (Sorry, I forgot something I was going to say, so this is continued from the previous review. Thinking of your pretty drawings distracted me.)
    But where's Aang?!?! Surely the Avatar would have been invited to something of this importance! And wouldn't Aang recognise Katara, since he has so much expierence with the Spirit world stuff, and just general avatar powers, what with his infatuation for Katara and whatnot. Which would in turn, freak out Miumi and possibly trigger her memories of being Katara? There's been forshadowing of Miumi regaining Katara's memories throughout this entire story. I really, really want to read how that happens. Also, why didn't we see Sokka/Hakoda in the trial? You mentioned the chiefs of the both water tribes, but not their names! You're killing me here! I need to know what happens! Please Please Please write soon! And thank you for writing this chapter, too.
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  • From ANON - Jo on July 06, 2008
    Thank you for updating!!! I'd been waiting for this chapter in anguish! I really like your consistent portrayl of Enki as boorish and self-important. I feel bad for poor Miumi/Katara for having to listen to whatever awful long winded speech he gave. As for the Iyashii clan, treason and exceution is fine for the higher-ups, but that leaves the matter of their estates left for Zuko to clean up. Do you suppose that they'd be given to Mirharki's family? I remember Miumi considered sending a gift to show that there were no hard feelings (just before the kidnapping took place, when she tried to leave). That would be cool. At the beginning of the chapter, when Miumi dressed in the blue and gold robe, she mentioned that she felt like the Fire Lady again. Does this mean that she'll be returning to court, or wearing blue more often? One of my favorite drawings of yours is Firelord and his Lady, with Firelord!Zuko and Firelady!Katara where Zuko is in red/black, Katara in a pretty blue/eskimo/kimono thing. The costumes are just so pretty and appropriate. Though I also like A Match Made in Heaven. Is that for Miumi/Zuko, what with the fire sages blessing thier union and whatnot? ^_^ Anyways, your drawings are pretty, and your stories are awesome! You rock.
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  • From ANON - ashes&roses on July 06, 2008
    I've just read your last chapter, and want to thank you for the update! I can't wait to see what Enki's punishment will be...
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  • From LdyDarkStr on July 06, 2008
    Almost two am, and here I am, enthralled once again. Sorry it took me so long to read. My own muses have given me the middle finger *sigh*. We're having a Zutara week on DA, if you didn't know, check out out Greenify Me's journey for more info.

    Yet again, I'm astounded by how brilliantly cohesive your plots are, how well researched and dedicated you are to character development. Wish you could be writing the show. Brilliantly done, can't wait for Capture of the Maiden to be updated as well. *hugs*

    Lady
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  • From ANON - Juls on July 01, 2008
    Just wanted to feed you and your muse with a review... ;-) Great story! I sometimes find that pieces which seek to be period-appropriate come off as halting or so overly-formal sounding that it renders the plot useless under a steaming pile of you-know-what. Yours is definitely NOT like that. It is realistic while maintaining the particular style with which you started. I love that though the tone is formal, there is still such a warmth to the story. I love the time you've spent developing the characters without giving us everything about them. I look forward to reading more!
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  • From ANON - Mira on July 01, 2008
    great chapter~! still left us hanging with the punishment though...

    i see, so affnet is the problem. i hope they fix that soon.
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