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Reviews for Volcano

By : Spleef
  • From ANON - InkHeart on January 07, 2006
    AHHHHHHHH! *deep breath* Okay. Chapter two was awesome! Aang's all grown up. He does seem like a clingy person and you wrote it very well. I love how you bought the inn keeper off.
    Hooray! I LOVE when Zuko goes on his power trips. I thought Zuko repeated himself a bit much with some phrases (i.e. accusing Aang of withholding Katara, threatening Aang, and "Katara is mine"). But merciful spirits, the exchange was awesome!
    Then of course the battle. The moves in the season finale were great. No sense in them going to waste. The soldiers are ooing and awing. I love it. *sigh* I realize Zuko doesn't want Katara to hurt herself but drugging her was kind of cowardly if you ask me.
    The person who taught Zuko the dragon is the guy who stabbed Katara right? Great cliffie. Please update soon.

    In my mind I rewrote this a bit. Like outside it was raining heavily and when Aang is knocked out face down in the mud, before Katara is hauled off she throws herself into a puddle and starts to breathe the water. Zuko yanks her up and she demands Aang be taken to shelter before he drowns in the mud and puddles. Katara threatens to keep hurting herself unless Zuko does this simple mercy, "You can't keep every dangerous object away from me! Something as simple as a comb can stab out an eye. Grant Aang shelter and I promise I won't contimplate suicide."
    Ah well. The workings of my mind are a mystery. I'll leave the writing up to you.
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  • From ANON - darkangle on January 07, 2006
    god! you should write a book.... i really loooove your stories....
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  • From ANON - queenyasha on January 06, 2006
    Wow that was really good!! LOL so they had been apart for a year!! so how old are they now? Please keep up the fantastic work you have been doing!!
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  • From ANON - Scarylady on January 05, 2006
    SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!! I was SOOOOOOOOOOO happy to see that this story had been updated! YAY! Katara kicked a little @$$! REALLY looking forward to the next chapter (no pressure ^-^). Reading your stuff just makes me happy! YAY!
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  • From ANON - Fyiarah on January 05, 2006
    OMG. Excellent chapter, love it! Keep writing, you're excellent.
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  • From ANON - Anonymous on January 05, 2006
    Hi there, this chapter was pretty interesting. I knew it wasn't going to be easy for them. Since this up, I got a feeling we'll see another chapter next week and a new chapter for Hot Water real soon this week. Don't get wrong, this story rocks. I hope that Aang will be okay and that things will be okay with everyone. Anyway keep up the good work on both of these, good luck with the rest of your stories and soon to be, see you later!!!!
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  • From Firefly4000 on January 03, 2006
    *smiles* exceptional first chapter amore, please update soon amore i wanna see what happens next *blows u a kiss and claps muchly putting this in recommended reading*
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 31, 2005
    Loving this twist if the story. Keep it up :-D

    (waves home-made Zutara flag)
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  • From ANON - Scarylady on December 30, 2005
    I know I reviewed this before, but as I was watching Moulin Rouge today I was reminded of this story. The way Zuko is so possessive reminded me of The Duke in that movie (especially the line "I'm not a jelous man, it's just I DON'T LIKE PEOPLE TOUCHING MY THINGS!!!!!!!" and then The Duke spazzes out). I hope you update soon...the suspense is murder...
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  • From ANON - Odessa on December 29, 2005
    Great Start and absolutely wonderful side story, I just discovered your story Hot Water and it is wonderful.
    Zuko's going to have one helluva time getting Katara back now that she is involved with Aang, your story has made me addicted to reading more ATLA fanfiction. I've even started downloading the episodes so I can be more familiar with the storyline. You have some typos on this first chapter, but that does not distract from the flow of the plot. I can't wait to see how you will write the reunion between Zuko and Katara, I'm guessing it's going to be SPICY.
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  • From ANON - Fyiarah on December 28, 2005
    Ahh! Awsome! Write! Write!
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  • From ANON - Kimono on December 28, 2005
    Me thinks that Zuko will go ballistic once he finds out how far another man has known Katara.
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  • From ANON - queenyasha on December 28, 2005
    WOW!! That was really good! I hope to read the next chappie of hot water soon!! And now I must hace the next chappie for volcano now!! He is going to erupt when he sees her!! LOL Keep up the great work!!
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  • From ANON - Creamerboy on December 28, 2005
    Hi, I'm a BIG fan of "Hot Water" and "Cold Fire." It made me branch out and write a fanfic story of my own ^_^ "Volcano" looks to be a great series. Please don't stop. You'll have the Zutara Trilogy.
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  • From ANON - swissnights on December 28, 2005
    please update today i have to know if Zuko find Kutara and what happens next
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